Open Poetry #26 |
Edgy |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Edgy I put it all behind me, what my future could have held. I'm flooded with the moments worded thoughts inside me, swelled. I'm bursting with the hurt that comes along with emptiness. Sometimes it catches up to me. I, no longer can suppress. I need no one to prompt me, the enemy's at my hand. It chokes me, though invisible those marks upon me land. I try each day a pill to take erasing all it should. But tears that capture you in mind rain down "if only's" would. A needle in a haystack, has found me, what are the odds? Unmasked or masquerading, they're both dressed in same facades. Who can tell what's in the heart of those who won't believe, those tales and revelations. Just archaic lies in weave. Those creams on hand to soothe me, smooth the chapped that cloaks my skin. You've rubbed me raw, emotion-wise. I bleed from deep within. I need no one to prompt my words I'm marked, but no one sees. They're blinded by their colors, rose while I stay ill at ease. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-06-2003 01:46 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
M...I can only send hugs across the miles...I know how it is [This message has been edited by passing shadows (05-06-2003 12:33 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Dixie hugsss back..now I am off to dig up some more weeds....... a never ending chore. (by the way, I am in prose, telling a "one in a million love story") M |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I need no one to prompt me, the enemy's at my hand. It chokes me, though invisable those marks upon me land. I try each day a pill to take erasing all it should. But tears that capture you in mind rain down "if only's" would. Maureen - I can relate to this....yup. Take heart dear lady. Go out and pull those weeds, I find it soothing therapy. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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