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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Thought I’ve heard the birds sing this morn At the very turn of dawn Chattering just where to go To catch a worm a seed in blow To start the gossip of the day Who did what and flew away Why was so and so not there Did she really, dear, oh dear. And as they search the ground in cheer Eyes are watching very near For breakfast prime is hungers time And is the time for major crime. It is a thing that bothers me That life eats life so strange to see It goes against my over soul And ethics of my self-control Barbaric is the only rhyme Barbaric are the sands of time. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Seymour Tabin, without thought where would our writing be?, I enjoyed this piece, nature and survival, the writer and the question. Take care. Sincerely Rick |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Sy...You have the deepest thoughts so early in the morn. Loved this rhyme of nature. Tea's on...I'll pour you one. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always dancing with you in the summer rain~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (05-05-2003 08:43 AM).] |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Whoever first said, a penny for your thoughts, clearly had never read one of your poetic gems. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I see when sought your taut of thought and the rhyme therein it wrought, then it brought forth that which is sought the inner self, which sees a lot... for in your simple good morning rhyme stands the test of line and time for as the bird wrests forth the worm we see ourselves, and thus, we squirm... but this is what you do, you see... you bring the real to poetry... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-05-2003 10:08 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rick Thank you for your understanding my friend. Nancy, Thank you and you have my morning  Tim LOL clever, thank you. Sunshine, A wise and clever write, thank you sweet. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - the circle of life is all it is. Yet, I worry about God's wee ones. To them it is just another day.....one day at a time making the best of each....as we all should. Blueberry muffins await you dear poet. hugs, Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, If it wasn't for you I would go hungry, LOL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Chattering just where to go To catch a worm a seed in blow To start the gossip of the day Who did what and flew away =============================== Your poetry, regardless of the topic or theme, never ceases to put a smile on me mothy face...its right as rain and sweet as the sunshine, that I begin each morn with your verse of rhymes and wisdom wrapped in couplets of cool. What better way to start me day than a Sy-sigh and winkie smile.     |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
It is a thing that bothers me That life eats life so strange to see It goes against my over soul And ethics of my self-control Barbaric is the only rhyme Barbaric are the sands of time. I do not understand this either. But the Nature and Animal Planet TV channels tells me it is survival of the fittest. Still doesn't seem like a good 'thought' though. I'm going out to feed the birds their store bought seeds so they're not eating my worms that aerate my garden so my beautiful flowers and grass can grow. Hugs this fine day and thank you for this poem. Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED THE READ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
That life eats life so strange to see it is strange isn't it... always a pleasure to read your morning words, Sy. hugs M |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Definitely a 'food for thought'. Yet... Life eats life... thus begets new breath. Yet life takes life... 'tis none but death. Enjoyed. CG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hellooo! Greetings and salutations! A thought of yours is worth a thousand of anybody else's! I thought that this particular thought of yours, was exceptionally well-expressed! I love the way your mind works and how you are able to blend your poetic blood with the ink of your pen. Angel hugs & kisses, EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (05-05-2003 12:30 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, To put a smile on your face is one of my larger aims in life. WWRS Marti Glad you agree,LOL vandana, Thank you dear. Maureen It's always a pleasure to have you read it and reply. Hugs CastleGuard Thank you for the read and comment. Earth Angel Comming from my favorite Angel it is a treasure. Hugs |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) I have never understood Social Darwinism and if this is how we must live accordingly, I think time is cursed and then watch when even the mammoths fall! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a disturbing but ever apparent truth, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. |
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