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Master
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since 1999-08-18
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Boston, MA

0 posted 2003-05-05 02:04 AM


“What to do if the words disappear as you write-
what to do

if they remain
and you disappear.”


Franz Wright

***

You pulled
a thread from my sweater
and
it kept on running like a run-on
sentence,
until,
practically naked,
I ran out of the
entrance,
where,
before the door shut,
the thread fell to the floor
and
came to an end...

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-05-05 09:41 AM



...leaving the eerie quality
of wanting to pick up the thread
to see where it will lead us...

very good, Master...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-05-05 09:43 AM


Not to worry..I shall roll it back into a ball and knit you another.
Amazing write here...much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
3 posted 2003-05-05 11:21 AM


I enjoyed this.....
It's nice to see your writing again!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-05-25 04:03 AM



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5 posted 2003-05-25 06:46 PM


Master~
I love the feel of this piece~
So touchable ... so real~

You are sooooooooooooo talented, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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