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Place Unafraid
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Place Unafraid |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Place Unafraid find me a place where rage is smaller than sand hearts are as vast as sky where I am no longer afraid to be alone nor afraid to be with another |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Fear is a double edged sword. Seems we're damned if we do and damned if we don't. I hope you find that place in between. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
... and when we overcome our fears we are so much stronger. Very touching, slick one! When you think you have heard it all, |
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Yossarian New Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 7 |
I often hear things or read things and say to my self “Why can’t I write things like that”, reading this was one of those times, I have to ask – what’s it like to actually write something this good? Btw - I’m not sure such a place exists but if it does and you find it can you drop me a line. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I almost thought I wrote this for a moment  M |
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Yossarian New Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 7 |
Nice hat btw |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
read it again...has more meaning each time around... M |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There is such a place....it's inside you. All you have to do is seek it, and be ready to accept what you find. This a beautiful little poem, and it is most definitely going into my library. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
if you find it... I'm sure it would be bad, somehow. thats the way everything works. But let me know if you do! this is good. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
helen, I'm fairly certain that makes us neighbors! WooHoo!!!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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lost_star Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 114NY, U.S.A |
I can definetly relate to this one, It's very well written! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Helen, when you find that place please invite me for dinner. |
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