Open Poetry #26 |
Resting Quill |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Of silent tongue and faded quill in moments when a pen heard... is silent upon the page of dusty parchment....wandering As trumpets raise quietly and fingers rest lightly upon... A strum of syllabic scrawl awaits...wondering Rest Poet...for thee art mightier than the sharpest scything sword... As twilight wanes upon the flickered flame dancing. So shall the hand that touches souls... Rest poet....till the scrawl sings, the words ring.... and thy words dance the halls of passionate blue... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Rest poet....till the scrawl sings, the words ring.... and thy words dance the halls of passionate blue..." ============================================= Barry..Barry...this is wonderful...fantastic!! And, I love it!! Bravo! *Didn't ya hear the sigh?* A keeper for my library kind poet sir. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I'm so glad your quill took a rest, from resting, to pen this one...it's quite fine! It has a restful quality to it, for certain. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
And with each rest, eloquence renewed. I had noted something lacking these pages...and I knew it had something to do with you. So good to have you here. TD |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
the Muse has returned... so be it... this goes with with Midnitesun's earlier penning this day... I can see the Muse was busy, pushing many along... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It's so nice to read you again Barry. You always write so eloquent. *s M |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry Your words danced off the page and touched my heart as they always do. For you my friend, "A friend bears the song in my heart and sings it to me when my memory fails" Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As twilight wanes upon the flickered flame dancing. So shall the hand that touches souls... Rest poet....till the scrawl sings, the words ring.... and thy words dance the halls of passionate blue... Goodness, Barry, I miss reading your wonderful words. This is so, so beautiful. Hugs, Ethel |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
....but don't rest too long.... I rested for nearly three decades before I started writing again.....! Giving that field a fallow season is ok, but letting it go to brush like I did -- too much. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
all is good |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Excellent poem! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your pen is a mighty scything sword, O Knighted One! Luvin' Hugs, EA |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry...You know a poet cannot rest...he writes even in his dreams. Your a wonder, dear man! |
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MysticDreamer Member
since 2003-04-21
Posts 131 |
A Great Write. Especially the ending. I never have enough patience waiting for the next idea but it's usually worth the wait. Thanks for sharing this. Good Will Always, Mystic Dreamer |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Hy Barry, Don't rest too long, enjoyed. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Much enjoyed, Barry...good to read you again.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Nice... "Cuidado con mi corazon."--R. Martin |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Barry, this is fantastic. But what do I do when I need my quill to wake up? Love your writes, always. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Barry - a pen rested is with desires to write as never before. Never stop your pen from writing... BC |
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