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Mixed Emotions |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Mixed Emotions Some days one feels listless, languorous thinking about the stillness compared to yesterday. The sweeping of rain by cars the only sound penetrating these walls. I take my first sips of coffee in years, hoping the caffeine will distribute equally making my body wish to stir and accomplish what is in my leftover mind. I surrender to patience, drop the nagging of myself knowing that time is always there and one day, soon I hope to stop hovering over myself and allow the dandelions in my life to die on their own. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
I hope to stop hovering over myself and allow the dandelions in my life to die on their own. These lines are beautiful, rounding up a well-written poem. Your use of language (listless, languorous) works well with the pokm, and the whole thing has a smooth feel to it. I enjoyed it very much. Well done Zaynab Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I can sense the mixed emotions in your words. and yes the hovering over ones self. You know I love what you said about the dandelions growing on their own, opposed to pulling them up and tossing them across the yard.  Morning hugs to you Maur~ |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I like the way you expressed yourself in this piece. Thanks for sharing. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Zaynab, thank you. I hope all is well in Kuwait. Lori, the thistles gave me a break this year but those darn dandelions. I should just make wine out of them, but I don't drink  Our weather hasn't given me enough nice days to clean out my gardens. But I have to eventually. Some day I am going to try an all weed garden and wouldn't I be surprised to see some flowers sneaking in? hugs M |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I know what you mean about weather...I keep hoping to get outside each weekend to do my yard work and then we get more snow...This morning I looked out my window to a foot of heavy, wet snow and it is still coming down...**hug** beautiful write...I always love reading your work... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
nakdthoughts - be strong for tomorrow will bring better days... BC |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'I surrender to patience, drop the nagging of myself knowing that time is always there and one day, soon I hope to stop hovering over myself and allow the dandelions in my life to die on their own.' The thought of surrendering to patience....like that. Not an easy feat.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful...I know just what you mean  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Florence, thank you, you slipped in btween the lines Karen, hi..good to see you. Well I am glad we are finished with snow...now all we need is some sunshine.Thank you for being here. I keep waiting Bill, I am looking forward to some better times. hugs M Nope Duncan it isn't easy but I am going to make it my motto... Dixie, I knew you would understand..have a nice day ok? hugs M |
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