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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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You are warm upon me like sky our black and whites painted with the smell of green as we lie in the music of countryside Skin kissed unaware of passers by my epiphany of unscathed blue here lies the love of passion for you Mysteries of depth indent the night stars into silence smile with me he says when i think of our love. learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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Zaynab Member
since 2003-05-04
Posts 59Kuwait |
Beautiful... I an't think what else to say! The words run so smoothly, and are rich with emotion. my epiphany of unscathed blue here lies the love of passion for you My favourite lines. Your use of words is wonderful, and doesn't feel at all forced. Well done Zaynab Kill me tonight and I will love again |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
gemjop - I like the soft touch of your writing... BC |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Gemma  I love this poem. This is so pretty... Mysteries of depth indent the night stars into silence smile with me he says when i think of our love. You know who it makes me think of. Oh yes, Gary are I are as strong as ever. Our love gets stronger instead of weaker. I'm glad he's so patient. I read your reply to my Tear Drop poem. I haven't responded to any of them yet, though. The thoughts that bring about that type of my writing are so sad. I miss you when you aren't here. E-mail me sometimes whenever you can't be around. I thought you had gotten your computer fixed. Sorry it's on the blink. Well, Lady, sorry I'm taking up your space on your poem. I'll talk to you later. Take care.  Heart Hugs,  Ethel |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Romantically beautiful....you write with all the tenderness of love....I love it... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
bout time..nice to have you back |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Hi Gemma, so glad to see you back. Like this a lot, soft and smooth and loving.... Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You had me with the first verse... I've missed reading you. Nice to see you too gemma~ |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
An uncluttered simple statement of love's strength. Well done. Thanks for sharing. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gemma: been wonderin where you have been . . . this is beautiful (dont you dare stay away that long) xxoo |
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A. L. Becker Member
since 2002-09-06
Posts 167San Francisco, California |
Very nice Gemma. i liked it a lot. "Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?' |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gorgeous write~ |
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