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Words and thorns
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Words and thorns |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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Entangled in a thornbush of words that pierce the skin bleeding trust in slow drip upon once hallowed ground |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I DO understand. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I vent its what i do, have enough locked inside already |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!!Powerful...but then words can cause incredible pain that takes forever to heal... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Raph, Then vent... you do it so well... touched the depth of me...you should see my invisible calloses...and a much thicker skin... A terrific writer, sensitive man.... Enjoyed, Hugs, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ah, so well I do know this, Aenimal, and once the bleeding starts it's so hard to stop.... A true lesson in this one. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahhh Raph . . . the bleed is always a step to growth amazing write as always xxoo |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Raph...once I start the way I probably need to, the bleeding may never stop. Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Raffaele, these are very touching words. Your bleeding makes the ground even more sacred, dear one. It is an act of healing. E' triste però! Abbracci, Margherita  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks everyone just a little vent, thanks for reading |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You kick poetic butt with this simple yet hauntingly beautiful purge. I like the theme/metaphor you use, it works well. GAWD I relate, but, then again, I'm sure you already knew that  Keep on writing! Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
venting helps.....consols the heart.... L~ Through the darkness |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
I like this Aenimal, tightly written! Corinne |
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