Open Poetry #26 |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
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the ocean is a private belief it asks for you alone hollows you like a conch listening to the vastness reflected |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
it ebbs your tide then rips away stranded, alone, seaweed, floating |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Zenmaster poet viking... I know a certain moth who is going to love these--maybe even as much as I do. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Awesome write, Brian. Enjoyed. Sunkissed. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the ocean is a private belief ======================== yesssssssss........ exactly. blue waved religion. (love your succinctity and impact of imagery) very cool series here... another one for my collection and off to see the next. You're the best I've ever felt ... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
And all who commune, will see her in a differing light |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
reminds me of a long time ago myself . . . love this story bri . . . xxoo |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Library |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoying~~ M |
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