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Bedcheck! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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on my instant message list I have to smile and note the bliss-- ya'll look like angels when you sleep. Smile--she dropped her teddy bear. Frowning as he grinds his teeth-- I whisper, "there's no monster there..." Quietly I shut the door. Dream you sweet in poet dreams-- tomorrows are your metaphor...   |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
awww this is sweet! but of course, you know you're obsessed when you have to say gnight to the computer before you can sleep. ..maybe thats why I couldn't sleep tonight!  Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was adorable, Karen. I loved this, and your ending line was just so perfect. Smiling at the visuals of this. Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Celeste....you're still writing your magic.....This is precious! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Sleep perchance to dream...or be inspired. Sleep? What's that? Cute one missy!!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh this is SO cute! May I ask...do you ever sleep???  ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I claim thee... a  but you knew I would when I saw the grins all around this lovely... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I do NOT grind my teeth!!! (damnedwitchmumblegrumblesaidshewouldnttell) [This message has been edited by wranx (05-03-2003 09:47 AM).] |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Karen, I love it when you do this. You are so cute hovering over everyone to protect like a little Mother Hen..... Thank you, sweet friend...  Hugs,  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, Enjoyed, enjoyed. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ya'll would be amazed at some of the things I see in there!!!  Stay tuned folks--We've got a pillow fight scheduled for after midnight tonight. Undies optional!  Thanks for smiling with me... HUGS--oh, and yes, Nancy? I am yawning too...off to the crypt I creep.  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Very nice K you know I do not feel rested until I know everyone is ok too that includes you . . . hug that bear close to you and Ed its: (damnedwitchmumblegrumblehahahashetold) xxoo |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Pillow fight. After midnight. Got it. Seats still available??  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! You say it with class and such wonderful affection...I love it... |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Darn!!! I thought that I had turned off that spy-cam before I went to sleep. Next time I'll be sure to smile before I doze off!!! Such a fun poem just to imagine about friends all sleeping on line. Good job. -Bob |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I agree that friends do become a part of our nighttime ritual, not unlike those living in our homes. This is a precious poem, serenity! |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
*smile* Kielo I know only one thing, and that thing is that I know nothing. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Cute is a tough word, though it fits here. Very well done making fun of all us cyber-obsessives! Now I MUST go to bed. *laugh* |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - geez, I hope I'm there also... BC |
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vashthestampede New Member
since 2003-05-03
Posts 9 |
Cute is definitely the right word, though endearing comes in a very close second. You should be careful, though, about that vivid imagination of yours. Mixed with a touch of white magic, you just can't predict what strange things might happen next. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
adorable! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
he he you have friends that sleep? I thought you and I stayed up to see the sun together but now I am jealous to find out you have a following. Yup, this was cute alright. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Winsome smirk here... Um.. Is that an oxymoron? ...Sleeping now... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
actually, the response to this took me by surprise...I was just having a bit of fun, but I'm so glad I managed to make a few of ya'll smile for a change. Thanks, once again for reading. And vash? oh yes, these are strange days, indeed. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You did notice that my bed is built for two and holding one??? When are you gonna witch me a better deal? LOL Enjoyed this... and SOMEONE is awfully cute when he grumbles. LOL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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