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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2003-05-02 01:32 PM



Spider’s Trance

Dancing in the forest glen,
Catching fireflies,
Not concerned with might-have-beens,
Singing lullabies,
Golden moonbeams off her hair,
Laughter forged with smiles,
Known such muse, once unaware,
Holds me for awhile ...

Silk on ivory, gently spun,
Flows with summer’s breeze,
Spider’s web-- Why left undone
Swaying from the trees?

Is it that your first love, Dear,
Be to your heart’s romance
And that is why, bewildered here,
I’m lost in happenstance?

Oh, yes, to me, it’s very clear,
I’ve caught your spider’s trance.


-Lighthouse Bob

© Copyright 2003 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-02 01:39 PM


i liked this very catchy write!!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

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2 posted 2003-05-02 01:40 PM


Now that was simply captivating Bob, wonderful poetry.
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3 posted 2003-05-02 01:58 PM



This flits!
It's lovely Bob...
so good to have you posting in Open!

Thank you for this!

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4 posted 2003-05-02 02:52 PM


I like this very much, Bob... it added a much needed smile to my day. *S*

And as Sunshine said... it's great to have you posting here in open. *S*

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5 posted 2003-05-02 04:16 PM


I was caught up in your enchanting spider's trance!
This whirled and twirled me about! Wonderfully imaginative writing!

Warm hugs,
EA

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6 posted 2003-05-02 05:57 PM


Bob:

you know I love your writing
and this is just . . .
a fairytale
Beautiful
xxoo

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7 posted 2003-05-02 08:38 PM




(sigh) Oh Robert, I love spiders, my whole family thinks they are creepy and don't like them but I actually think they are beautiful creatures just like every creature He makes because of the beautiful art they make! (big hugggsssssss) I even love to hold spiders in my palm and put them on my windowsill too, unless of course they're black widows, LOL, then I just get a jar, trap it in, and release it in the forest outside the house! This is wonderful, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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