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davidmerriman Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 123Dallas, TX |
Drifting Draw me a horizon with purple ink, Painting the sunrise; a treat to our eyes So weary watching the world sink. Let me sit afloat in paradise. Why, let me bask in endless rays, And set me adrift, trusty ship, Peacefully for a thousand days, And may I never stir or quip. And may I never look to shore, The blur of sights beyond my lids. Life, a trite and meaningless bore, Something my peaceful mind forbids. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oh! This is so good!! I really love this phrase Draw me a horizon with purple ink, Painting the sunrise; a treat to our eyes You've got my vote!  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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edh Member
since 2003-03-26
Posts 111 |
Very nice. You've got my vote. And let me watch the setting sun. Dream of the day we are one. When nights are long and days are endless. How very strong my only friend is. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 very good! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
wonderful write |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You know... There is much energy thriving in the sea... you harness the power well here. TD |
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davidmerriman Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 123Dallas, TX |
actually, i didn't really think about this poem, i just wrote what sounded nice, loosely based on the idea of daydreaming. I didn't know how the Book Submissions thing worked; I just checked it without question! Now that I know about it; great idea! Thanks to all who voted. :-) many many poems will come. hehe. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
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