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D to the drama M to the mama |
Guardurthoughts Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 66 |
Hail to the queen mother of self proclaimed angels who wears a mask to hide herself, to hide from the truth of the world Bow to the almighty princess of crazy anthems Who spews them out and infects others. If I Jump you jump,if I cut... would you? Miss. Barbie Doll,Miss. Drama mama,Miss Country time Who can’t handle life or words of truth And wants only you for her, like ball and chain. Was it wife or friend that I obtained? Who is to blame nobody knows…. This contract is void The ink has run, And the signatures only splatter... Welcome to the real world……. Truth awaits you...ready or not. ___repost did a little re writing here and there thanks! ~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~ |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Good read. It's amazing I won. I was running against peace, prosperity, & incumbency. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Enjoyed this read very much Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
This reminds me of someone I used to know. I guess it's obvious why I say "used to know," but if it's not, oh well. Glad I'm not married yet, this poem makes me want to wait even longer... heh... Very nice writing. The style is so unusual and eye-catching that I think it worthy of inclusion, and I'm voting. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) So sad but true, if only the real world wasn't all license and registration please, please sign there and add todays date philosophy! (sad sigh) You speak of the truth of these values so vividly, sweet friend, this has my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Erica, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Ahhh, just the perfect amount of angst and not tipping the over-emotional scale. Excellent balance! Love it. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gadzooks! Them's hurtin' words! Sorry for your state of pain and disillusionment! So often people put their best foot forward while they are dating and then after they are married, their true colors come out--and that is not always a pretty sight! You portrayed this scenario very well indeed! Good luck! EA |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Enjoyed Bridgette |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Savage and true. Excellent. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
enjoyed ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I agree with Mike, savage but needful I suppose. A good write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good write! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
I enjoyed and I voted. Love reading all these great writes. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, a very good write, with a lot of emotions in it. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very interesting piece of writing. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Now you know whay a LITTLE knowledge is a dangerous thing. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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