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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Set thunder to the distance Where fire meets heaping black rock Let the mirrors of life Reflect your secrets Make for us an answer Tall brown ones bend and sway Naked but never alone They reach a hello to the painter The One who brushed the sky With kisses Sleep, my love In due season your soul Shall revive Sunkissed. "I have to hurry past the moon...to Jupiter..." [This message has been edited by Sunkissed (02-17-2003 07:32 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is just beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is so gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love those simple meditative sounds of Mother Earth and always cherish them with all my heart and ear! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I have my vote on it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sunkissed...always a pleasure to read your writings...always! However, in order for me to vote for it, my dear, you need to check your submission box! |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Loner & Noah, thank you for your comments and for reading my work often. I appreciate that so much. Lady in White, thanks for the extra push to get over here and the heads up. I never saw the little box when I first posted. *hugs to you all* Sunkissed. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"They reach a hello to the painter The One who brushed the sky With kisses" beautiful beautiful imagery...  |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Love the imagery. This seems to be quite a popular theme with the submissions for Reflections thus far, and it really matches the cover of the book, don't ya think? Well, I think so. Very nice poetry. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very beautiful...  |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
In particular, I liked those last two lines. A tick for the beauty presented. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You know I love this. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed the read PoetFriend Sunkissed... Smiles2u *~coco~* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
They reach a hello to the painter The One who brushed the sky With kisses Sleep, my love In due season your soul Shall revive ============================ surreal surrender....lovely lovely unique writing SK. oouuu eeee oouu ah ah ting tang walla walla bing bang ... |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
"...They reach a hello to the painter..." Sooo cool! *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
The one who brushed the sky with kisses - awesome! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Nicely written work... much enjoyed... thanks regards, sudhir |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
What a wonderful description of what it is to create art... Thanks for posting! Oh, make me Thine forever |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed so much...very well done and beautiful. ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
So beautifully penned. I enjoyed this. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Most excellent -- this one's a keeper for sure. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Much enjoyed. My vote is in. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very nicely done, it gets my vote  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sunkissed, Loved the imagery in this beauty, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Beautiful "Earth Tones"--and Sky Tones as well... Lovely imagery and feeling to this wondrously poetic expression. Love & Light, EA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
gorgeous. Has a mystical lean of spirituality to it that me likes very much! |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Beautiful little poem,Sunkissed.You have my vote! Peace,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Nicely rendered. Joyce |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
such a lovely and refreshing write...i dont normally quote a part of a poem that i like but this is just simply amazing imagery! you got my vote. take care. amy "Tall brown ones bend and sway Naked but never alone They reach a hello to the painter The One who brushed the sky With kisses" "love is like a butterfly-- |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sun - this is lovely such inspiration reminds of the island of Kauai where I left half of my heart thank you good luck xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like this |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
yep...want this one, that's for sure... |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
A very stimulating write that inspires the artistic in me to stand up and applaud. Most wonderful imagery expressed here. God bless. -Bob |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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