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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia 
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Dancing on the music of a breeze to not return Waving to the others all impatient for a turn Riding breeze which cradled to a voice of lullaby Sailing with the season and its final note goodbye Then landing to a softness, which compelled a sense to sleep Just laying there with others who all took their final leap Then looking unto mother who just stood in naked awe Before we slept the sleep of sleeps to part forevermore [This message has been edited by Rick (04-28-2003 09:04 AM).] |
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Lynda Member
since 2003-04-26
Posts 52Vic, Australia |
A lovely, lovely poem Rick. No colours of Autumn, which is what I usually expect at this time in poems...which are the visual and what I get at school. This is a feeling and an action of Autumn - so different to what I have read before....well done Rick! Lynda |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Very cool Rick - loved it - voted. He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Lynda, all that I could think about was the falling leaves, I know Autumn means colour, but it did not come into the picture that I could see, thanks for your wonderful comment, it was very much appreciated. Poet4Christ, great to see you here, very pleased you enjoyed and voted, thank you. To you both, again thank you, heart felt reponses. Sincerely Rick |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Beautiful Rick. Gets my vote! Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Dancing on the music of a breeze to not return Waving to the others all impatient for a turn Riding breeze which cradled to a voice of lullaby Sailing with the season and its final note goodbye So pretty....The title caught my attention too cuz Autumn is my favorite season!!!! LOVELY WRITE!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Chris, thanks for the great comment and the vote, very much appreciated. Hi Bridgette, always lovely to have you visit, thanks for the reply and the comment. To you both, thank you. Sincerely Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
My vote is in - lovely! |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
passing shadows, thanks for the reply, appreciated. SPIRIT, great to see you here, thanks for the vote and the reply. Sincerely Rick |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Dixie, another bump up, thank you. Sincerely Rick |
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