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MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2003-04-28 05:48 AM

The tide is changing and I can’t swim,

Seeking help,

I optimistically murder a hymn.

From the depths of the slippery sea,

The rising current is snapping and spitting at me.

Feeling tired and weary ,

But eager to live,

I question the waters motive.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-04-29 04:28 AM

deep write...how did it get down so far with no replies...?

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-04-29 02:23 PM

good

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

3 posted 2003-04-29 03:44 PM

Interesting little piece. I enjoyed.

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2003-08-13 11:55 AM

I Just read two of your new post (augest 13 2003) and i thought it was a joke but i tell you i really like this and many other stuff you have wrote.

Tequilia

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