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My love was one |
arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
My Love My Love was one, Who made the birds sing ! And in the depths of Winter Could turn my thoughts to Spring She was the ending of my day Shared each mornings light And in between these lay A warm and loving night Sadly I turn away from where she lays Leaving love ,life,and all delight Weary and endless are my days Cold and lonely are the nights Arthur |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Arthur, enjoyed the sad read, why would one ever leave this love, life plays us strange roles indeed, but live it we must. Sincerely Rick |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Michael! ~Hugs across the pond~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Lynda Member
since 2003-04-26
Posts 52Vic, Australia |
Arthur A very personal poem that struck a chord. If this be true,please don't choose to leave her where she lay - allow her love to embrace your heart. She will warm you in the night and will be with you through the days, crying and maybe even smiling with you, as your life continues to unfold. Lynda |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Touching and sad. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
even just reading this makes me feel lonely... so sad Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
This lovely poem has an old-world feel and a tone of poignancy in its form and expression. It also has a lyrical quality which makes me want to grab a lute and start strumming a melody to your lyrics. The imagination boggles...there I am, a minstrel, sitting at the foot of the throne of King Henry VIII strumming and humming this song. Gosh! I'm getting carried away. You are to blame for writing such evocative lines!! :-) Patrick Talty |
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