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Thr rain hides my tears

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2003-04-24 06:32 AM

I’m freefalling ,

Into the abyss,

I wish I had been more neutral,

Just like the Swiss.

Why did I kill all the good inside me?

Tortured words from a troubled mind,

I guess that’s the story off mankind.

Despairs cold grip is tugging at me,

I’ve been cursed just like the fig tree.

At least the rain hides my tears.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-04-24 10:38 PM

interesting write

"one needs not challenge all the players to win the game"

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

2 posted 2003-04-25 05:04 AM

A nice depressing poem with some very hard questions. Stick around here and your poetry will definitely improve. You might become a star of DP if you're not already on the ladder as is.

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
--Smit
My Creations

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-04-28 05:32 AM

at least

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