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Rick
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0 posted 2003-04-21 12:05 PM



Please come with me and journey to a place where voices speak
Where angels murmur wishes and where answers I do seek
Come venture through my guesthouse which has floors and floors of room
Where sometimes screams are echoed and where angels sing a tune

Where doors are always open, where I smell the stench or sweet
Where seemly ghosts do wander through the halls I never meet
Where I can sometimes taste the blood or banquet so divine
War and peace of souls release, does seem the ever mine

I’ve wandered through the corridors, been lonely in my plight
Not found those many voices which come calling every night
I’ve etched the words in memory that I’ve found along the way
As voices keep on calling and don’t ever go away

I dreamt that I had found them and we partied till the dawn
I felt at one, passed torment, then another one was born
To waken me from sleep again, to voices in my head
So here I wait dear traveler, let us search this road ahead

© Copyright 2003 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2003-04-21 12:16 PM


It's frustrating when the voices become silent (or maybe I've lost my ability to hear them). Well done, Rick, I like this a lot!
Rick
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2 posted 2003-04-21 12:27 PM


Denise, thanks for the reply, the voices are always speaking to me, you are right, if they were to become silent I would be lost. Your comments are much appreciated.

Sincerely
Rick

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-04-21 04:13 AM


yes
Rick
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4 posted 2003-04-21 04:30 AM


passing shadows, lets start now, there are many ways we can go. Thanks for the reply, as always, appreciated.

Sincerely
Rick

QjQ
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5 posted 2003-04-21 01:39 PM


So here I wait dear traveler, let us search this road ahead


very well thought closeing

Justbleu
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6 posted 2003-04-21 01:50 PM


Please come with me and journey to a place where voices speak
Where angels murmur wishes and where answers I do seek
Come venture through my guesthouse which has floors and floors of room
Where sometimes screams are echoed and where angels sing a tune

I must say this is one of my favorites of yours....Enjoyed!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Rick
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7 posted 2003-04-22 06:57 AM


QjQ, again thank you for this comment, somehow we are all travelers, if not searching together we search for someone to join the journey. Always love to get your feed back, thanks.

Bridgette, I hope that I can make many more your favorites, thank you so much for this reply, it was heart felt.

To you both, again thank you.

Sincerely
Rick

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-04-23 04:32 AM


lead on and I will follow
Rick
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9 posted 2003-04-23 06:09 AM


passing shadows, could be the blind leading the blind, would be a pleasure to have you there, thanks again for the reply.

Sincerely
Rick

Verve
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10 posted 2003-04-23 07:20 AM



Too many a time we let the voices go unheard... it's always good to keep in mind that they're always there to turn to...

This is a delightful read. I really like your works!


Cheers!

Rick
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11 posted 2003-04-23 08:13 AM


Verve, nice to see you everywhere at the moment, I am glad you enjoy my work, I am enjoying your comments, again thank you.

Sincerely
Rick

SPIRIT
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12 posted 2003-04-25 07:18 PM


My vote is happily cast.
Rick
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13 posted 2003-04-26 12:38 PM


SPIRIT, thanks for casting your vote here, great to have you share in my works, much appreciated.

Sincerely
Rick

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