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arthur
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0 posted 2003-04-14 05:27 AM



Lord
( note -this poem has two interpretations-which you choose depends on you )

Lord,why do you stand outside my gate
Why do you knock,watch and wait?

Knock on my heart Lord ,but not today
Lord:let me be,please go away !

Lord:Why this unceasing care
Is my wicked soul so rare?

Lord :This time is just for me
I am deaf to Angels and to Thee

Lord:Why do you waste your time?
I am Satan's child,not thine.

arthur

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Irie
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1 posted 2003-04-14 01:37 PM


Heavy words ....
What I get from this is that this person does not want to be held accountable, doesn't not want to be
responsible.

Powerful!

~Sheri

"Don't wait for your ship to come in ...
Swim out to it"

Kellie_Cantrell
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2 posted 2003-04-14 02:09 PM


Wow- This was very strong and powerful, good write!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2003-04-14 07:09 PM


I think thee does protest too much.  This soul is wavering.  Joyce
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-04-14 11:20 PM


Well done!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-04-14 11:56 PM




(big hugggssssssss) I think this can be seen like positive and negative film, dearest friend, this definitely has a yin-yang quality to it, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-04-29 04:34 AM


enjoyed this...much truth here, for all
SPIRIT
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7 posted 2003-04-29 03:56 PM


Interesting!
Lynda
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8 posted 2003-04-30 06:04 AM


So, you're being hassled....they (He?) means well, don't they?. Another poem from the heart.
Lynda

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