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Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
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0 posted 2003-04-12 02:01 PM



In Between Land....

I'm traveling through silence
far into the unknown...
It seems so dark and aimless
so scared to go alone

Struggling through a land of thoughts
so difficult to leave
I need a helping hand so bad
too much to fear and grieve

And see there is my guiding Man
leading me each day
Without Him I am lost...
lost in every way

Now I have arrived with Him
together hand in hand
He brought me here to rest a while
In this in between land....



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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2003-04-12 02:23 PM



A place of secluded
melody
this in between land,
my man, and me...

~*~

Smiling...clicking....

sending hugs!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
2 posted 2003-04-12 02:25 PM


I already wondered where you were.

Getting my vote for sure.

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-04-12 02:49 PM




(smiles) Oh Neeraja, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, and may your love forever welcome you to each day with a graceful hand and sunshine smile! (kiss on cheek) Yay, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, swee Neeraja, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Joyce Johnson
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4 posted 2003-04-12 05:18 PM


Another great entry from you.  Joyce
garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-04-12 07:47 PM


Neeraja, this is beautiful. So
peaceful feeling. It has my vote.  
Hugs,

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22
Posts 812
The Netherlands
6 posted 2003-04-15 02:29 PM


Karilea  

Titia  

Noah  

Joyce  

Garysgirl  

Thanks to you all!!!

Neeraja

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-04-23 04:29 AM


good write!
Verve
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since 1999-06-23
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Singapore
8 posted 2003-04-23 07:25 AM




Lovely...


Cheers!

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
9 posted 2003-04-23 08:30 AM


Neeraja, enjoyed the read very much, well deserved the read and the vote.

Sincerely
Rick

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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10 posted 2003-04-24 02:22 AM


And see there is my guiding Man
leading me each day
Without Him I am lost...
lost in every way

very good lines!!!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
11 posted 2003-04-24 10:44 AM


Beautiful! You are never really alone...

Love & hugs,
EA

Balladeer
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12 posted 2003-04-24 09:55 PM


A guiding hand makes all the difference...vote's in, Neeraja!
Poet4Christ
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 211
Oklahoma City
13 posted 2003-04-26 01:03 AM


This poem is very restful and positive.  I know that there are different things that first attract us to certain poems; with me, it is the title.  Love the title.  I voted and God bless you

Thanx - Tim

He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
14 posted 2003-04-27 09:01 AM


Neeraja, enjoyed the work here a great deal, please rest well in your in between land, my vote is up.

Sincerely
Rick
  

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
15 posted 2003-04-28 12:06 PM


He makes all the difference....Wonderful write!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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