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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands 
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This poem is dedicated to Guruswamy. All The Pieces One day I asked a wise man why it took so long for him to cure me… He looked at me with so much love in his eyes before he spoke… My child… if you want me to fix your broken heart you have to give me all the pieces… |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I enjoyed this...very philosophical... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Neeraja! Welcome back! I'm so glad you are here ... now let's see what we can do to get this little "gem" into Reflections - one of your finest pieces in your poetic arsenal!  Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...[This message has been edited by Sunshine (04-12-2003 09:28 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Neeraja~ This is a brilliant little piece~ So touching ... so real~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes indeed. Very insightful. Joyce |
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machiner Member
since 2003-03-13
Posts 67MA, US |
That was a fine poem. Thanks for sharing it... machiner |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wise words indeed! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Neeraja I heard this another way but enjoyed your rendition. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I love it! ya, we have to find the pieces...and it's hard... Eliza Simmons |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a beautiful poem. I'll do my part to get it into the book. "reading" Hugs, Ethel |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Neeraja: Such a poignant write and I really enjoyed it. I am voting for it of course! Good luck! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Neeraja: Such a poignant write and I really enjoyed it. I am voting for it of course! Good luck! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Yes, loved it before, love it now again. Voting done! Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Neeraja, I couldn't help but cry reading this beautiful poem because I believe such a loving Lord exists and He is capable always of mending each and every heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is precious, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Neeraja, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I haven't been around for a while but this feels like a warm bath!!! Thank you all!!! Neeraja |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this needs to be in Reflections!  ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Such a wonderful piece of philosophy wrapped up in a perfect container... This DEFINITELY is worthy of being a part of Reflections!!  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is wonderful .... I read it this morning and have thought about it all day. Great, great writing ... Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Neerja, this is a wonderful poem with a wonderful message and feel to it. Love & Light, Linda |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
welcome back...always home here...helen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 I love this one! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
So very very true and at the same time so very very simple. I liked your poem a whole lot. Good job. -Bob |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My vote for this neat, wise and lovely poem. Love, Margherita |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
This is just an awesome write. It must be in the book. How I have lived this philosophy this past year and find it so personal. Incredible! Here's my vote. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
 SO much is said, is so few words! This is perfect! My vote is in ~Sheri |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
...And yet we tend to want to hold on to this broken shards of our heart, and refuse to let them go... Good write. I enjoyed this very much. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Neeraja - you write with much wisdom. My vote... BC |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I am so happy with all the votes and with all the sweet comments!!! Thanks!!!! Neeraja |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I've been on a bit of a poetry hiatus..(against my will)  but wanted to stop in and vote while there was still time. Well done!! Glad you made it here for the book Neeraja Ocean wrapped around the sun |
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just a junkie Member
since 2003-03-04
Posts 53 |
Nice poem. Well put. Short and powerful. I'm voting. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Perfect temperature indeed...  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes, what everyone has already said. Liked this much! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
 BUMP |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely written |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Wonderful! Happily voted. |
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