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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
I sit wondering why with us you could not stay I know with us you would be if you had your way I have to believe you are so much better off That you are in heaven on clouds so soft Sometimes with you I so long to be When I get to heaven your face I will see For now you are happy with loved ones that passed on before All of you have wings and like a bird you can soar Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Rita, I really do love this poem. I can tell that it's from your heart. I'm glad that you made it a book submission.  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very touching. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Carol, I send many angel hugs your way, dearest friend, this is so very touching but I know your brother will always love you so much and never ever forget you! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carol, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Ethel, thank you for your kind words I know I talk to you a lot about my brother and you know how bad I still miss him and again thank you for always being there Love You  Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become Lots of Love Rita [This message has been edited by carol (04-10-2003 09:59 PM).] |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
spirit, Thank you for your comments Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Noah, you always says the sweetest things I really appreciate your kind words Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become Lots of Love Rita [This message has been edited by carol (04-10-2003 10:00 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thank you, Rita. I appreciate it. Ethel |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
carol, such a beautiful and heart-felt write! you brought tears to my eyes, but that is not a bad thing. this reminded me of my Mom. She is up in those clouds with your brother as well. Just remember one thing--he's always with you, no matter what! you got my vote hon, and take care. Amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
carol, gosh it seems that you have gone through some difficult times...this must be in the book to accompany your other poem...peace and courage to you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Carol, by reading your own words, you will be comforted by the beauty, comfort, truth and peacefulness of them. God bless you all. Love & Eternal Light, Sending warm loving hugs and prayers, Linda |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Amy,so sorry about your loss maybe my brother and your mom are keeping each other company thanks for your comments and vote kaile, thank you for your comments I appreciate it Linda, you are right it comforts me to be able to write thank you so much Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is a very nice piece of poetry..... Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
Bridgette, thank you so much Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
a vote and a bump.. Carol, find peace in that you will be together one day, flying together. God bless you.. I really enjoyed it. He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
poet4christ, thank you so much for your reply Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
A nice sad poem. I like the content but I think the reversal of wording in order to get the rhyming to work makes this poem a little awkward. However the poem still strikes with me, a man with a brother, though he hasn't died. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
fracta1007,thank you for your comments Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
warm and touching thoughts |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
QjQ, thank you so much for taking time to read my poem To everyone that has taken the time to read my poem and voting for thank all of you Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
passing shadows, thank so much for reading my poem Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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