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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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What dances through your mind sweet little girl To cause that precious smile of delight Has God sent little angels to unfurl The mysteries of heaven through the night? What secrets would you tell if you could share With us that charming land within your head Do fairies twirl about your teddy bear And sprinkle star-dust magic on your bed? Do tiny pups and kitties roll around In endless play to cause hilarity Within your dreamland world could there be found A doting soul who looks a bit like me? May only good befall you without fail Awake, asleep, forever, Abigail. ~ For my sweet little granddaughter, Abigail [This message has been edited by Denise (04-10-2003 06:48 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Does this surprise me? Not at all... Does it please me? A crystal ball? That you're here now, with such bliss... wants me to allow her a grandmotherly kiss! [and click!] |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my! Oh my! and another click!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Denise....lovely and loving!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Awwwwwwwwwwww ! Now you KNOW Delaney's Grandma LOVES this one~ Ummmm, Hmmmmmmmm, wonder if Delaney's old enough to vote ?  Could be .... just could be ! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
AAAAWWWWWW Denise, I'm so glad that you submitted this. So much love and heart is in it. Has my vote... Hugs, Ethel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 (yes.) |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Very sweet. It's got my vote... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
nice thing you did.Eliza Simmons |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Denise, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your gorgeous words do! (kiss on cheek) May your Abigail forever be blessed with smiles and blessings, dearest friend, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Abigail, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
There just is nothing as inspiring as a sweet grandchild except of course your own hild. . I'd love to have my children small again, except I would have to give up those grandchildren. Lovely poem from another doting grandma. Joyce |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Awwww....it must be so wonderful to be a Grammy! Hope I know this joy some day. Enjoyed your poem .... hugs for peace, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH YESSS! A *click* for all the grandmas out here! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
And a click for all the wannabe grammies ~ Such a sweet piece of your heart Denise ~ Bonnie |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Delightful! This grandmother gives a well-deserved vote on this one. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you so much everyone! I appreciate your kind words and votes! I thought I'd give Abigail's poem a shot at the book since the poems that I wrote for her sister Nicole and her cousin Christian were in the first book. If this one makes it, all my grandkiddies will be in print! Nonetheless, I am very blessed just having them in my life! They are all very precious! Thanks again! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Denise, This is precious. I love every line. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is so tender and sweet Denise!!!! I enjoyed very much!!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
This poem will be passed through the generations via Abigail and the anthology will take its place alongside the family Bible. Thus is immortality achieved for a writer of your calibre! Thanks for sharing this heartfelt song of praise! Patrick Talty |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Denise: This is a loving and beutiful poem for Abigail and I do hope it makes the book. I am voting for it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Denise: This is a loving and beutiful poem for Abigail and I do hope it makes the book. I am voting for it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Denise, this is just how I feel when I watch my little Savanna sleep. Isn't it great? Lovely write. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise Delightful, you have my vote |
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Poet4Christ Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 211Oklahoma City |
Denise - I love the imagination and visuals in this poem. It would make a great bed time children's book. God bless you. I would love to see this one in the book. You have my vote and thank you. Thanx - Tim He that trusteth in his own heart is a fool: but whoso walketh wisely, he shall be delivered. Proverbs 28:26 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Denise, I do hope all your grandkids poems will be in print. Here is my contribution to a wonderful cause. What a delightful write. I love kids and grandkids! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So sweet and beautiful... I love this! *S* |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Very nice Denise!! mysticpoe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My vote for this lovely poem for Abigail. Love, Margherita |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Wasn't she just born?... and now she's running around in mischievous little circles about your house, eh??... This is a wonderful submission, Denise - Looking forward to seeing it in the book...  |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Smiling vote here, Denise |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you all so much for your lovely replies and votes! I appreciate you all very much! Nan, yep, she sure is! But she's so darned cute doing it! Michael, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is beautiful Denise. Voting! Maree  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Absolutely, without a doubt, YES. Love this, Denise. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
a click for a sweet grandmother!!! Neeraja |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now about the only thing sweeter than these words you share is that pic of her in your lap. Yes, this belongs in the book and there will be many days when she reads this and have a smile shine across her face. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thanks so much, everybody! So glad you enjoyed it! I appreciate your lovely words very much! Mark, actually the little on my lap is one of my other grandchildren, Christian, another cutie! Here is a link of some pictures of all three of them. I have to get some more recent pics. Pictures become outdated quickly when they are little! Thanks again! /pip/Forum29/HTML/001198.html |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I've been on a bit of a poetry hiatus..(against my will) but wanted to stop in and vote while there was still time. Lovely tribute Denise! Ocean wrapped around the sun |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Janet! I appreciate it so much! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
awww How could I not vote for this?  ~Liz Waited on a line of greens and blues, just to be the next to be with you.. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
This is such a gem! You got my vote! take care.amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Liz and Amy! I'm glad you took the time to read it and that you liked it! |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is a lovely poem. I hope it gets into the book and that your granddaughter will appreciate and cherish it throughout her years. 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Kevin! I appreciate it very much! Glad you liked it! |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
This is such a sweet and positive piece of love. I feel like calling my grandma now and asking her to write me a poem. I'm sure your granddauter will cherish this poem someday. Jeremy Be it in the truest form, or a desperate lack thereof, fail not to understand that the inspiration is love. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice,sweet,loving ,thoughts you write |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you so much, Jeremy and QJQ for such lovely comments! I appreciate it! |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This makes me think of all my nieces, and it also brings a smile to my own face. Lovely You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Thank you, Jenn! I'm glad I gave you a smile! |
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