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Deep_Inside
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since 2002-02-14
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i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2003-04-09 03:21 PM



Where did you go
To hide way
Under the bridge
To spend the day

You ran away
After that fight
Away from your thoughts
To spend the night

You cried
As you ran from me
The tears in you eyes
That I couldn’t see

The complete shame  
Across your face
That reminds me
Of that place

The thoughts
I instilled in you
That you held
To be so true

You found out
They where a lie
When I couldn’t
Tell you why

There’s just one thing
I have to say
It hurts me that
Your not here today

© Copyright 2003 Matt - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-04-09 04:15 PM


Nothing hurts more than words sometimes as this poem show.  Joyce
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-04-09 04:30 PM


You conveyed your lonliness so poetically.

Love & Light ~ and warm hugs,
Earth Angel

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2003-04-09 06:49 PM


i felt this so deeply inside! such
a powerful and sad write. you have
an amazing way with words! you got
my vote. take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-04-10 08:13 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Matt, I send many angel hugs your way, dearest friend, this is a very aching write and know your friend misses you too but he will always be with you in heart! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Matt, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745
California Desert
5 posted 2003-04-11 01:48 AM


You portrayed and shared your 'aloneness' well in this piece of writing.
carol
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since 2003-01-25
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Florida USA
6 posted 2003-04-12 10:18 PM


on my vote

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-04-23 02:07 PM


I know the feeling well
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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U.S.A.
8 posted 2003-04-23 04:04 PM


this write shows feelings well
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
9 posted 2003-04-24 11:19 AM


This is sad....
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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