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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia ![]() |
Introduction: I had never given much thought to the idea of predestination until I met and married my beautiful wife, Xiao Yan. I knew you, my dearest, in long gone days, Your face did my dreams adorn. I knew of your grace, your warmhearted ways; I knew you before you were born. Before you were born, my treasured one, I knew you would one day appear Like bright, golden rays of morning sun, Or the music of bells ringing clear. I knew of the beauty of body and mind, I knew of your wondrous eyes; I knew of the nature so gentle and kind, I knew of your spirit so wise. I knew you, my darling, through loneliness While I waited for you in my life; I yearned for the feel of a whispered caress As you vowed to be lover and wife. When you finally came I knew it was you (I had known you for ages before) So I took up your hand (as you wanted me to) And I saw 'twas my ring that you wore. Yes, I knew you, my loved one, from long gone days When you came on that predestined morn; I could now feel the grace of your warmhearted ways Known in dreamings before you were born. [This message has been edited by pjtalty (04-08-2003 10:55 PM).] |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh lovely! Now I am curious - did you meet on your travels there (referring ot your submission in prose?) if I may ask? Funny, how we know we have been waiting all our life for that special person when they finally show up. Don't be too hard on yourself - even Einstein had trouble tying his shoelaces. |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I am so glad you found her, the one you knew before. Lovely, lovely poem. Joyce |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (sigh) Oh Patrick, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your gorgeous words too, I belive written in the stars by God's cursive rests every lovers promise! (big huggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patrick, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
How wonderful for you and your wife to have found each other again. It was destined to be. ![]() Lovely poem... ![]() Light & Eternal Love, Earth Angel |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Lucky wife! Lucky you!! ![]() Vote worthy indeed. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
such a beautiful write! i also believe in fate and destiny. you def got my vote for this ![]() take care. amy ![]() "love is like a butterfly-- |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
lovely gentle write ![]() Eliza Simmons |
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carol Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624Florida USA |
![]() Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I'm happy for you. What a wonderful surprise. One day their she was for you. Sweet poem!!!!! Bridgette ![]() "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
this is just a fab write of feelings |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, this is gorgeous! I'd love for it to be in the book! Very beautifully expressed! |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
nice and romantic arthur |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah |
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Lynda Member
since 2003-04-26
Posts 52Vic, Australia |
I really enjoyed reading your poem. Ain't love grand? It would make any wife/friend feel very special. Lynda |
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