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End and Beginning |
arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
End and Beginning A Soul wrapped in fragility Is born again in strife New born pure fragilty Begins another life. Brief time to take life's measure Enjoy each new delight Learning quickly what to treasure Before the fading of the light Spring gives way to winters frost The seasons change,the young grow old The souls wrapping leaves will soon be lost As the warmth of life turns ever cold The soul released from mortal clay Is set free again from strife Within Gods keeping let it stay Until called again to life Living teaches us to die And dying teaches all this truth Every death has a new beginning Wrapped inside it. arthur [This message has been edited by arthur (04-06-2003 04:40 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I can't vote if you don't hit the submission button. Joyce |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!!! Oh I hope this one gets into the book Michael! ~Hugs across the pond~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Michael, this is wonderful, dearest friend, there is a beginning after every end and like a phoenix may we rise out of all the ends that we come across each step of the way! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Great write. Vote happily cast. |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Beautiful and thought provoking,Arthur. Nicely written.Vote! Peace,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I am glad you fixed it. My vote is in. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (04-07-2003 02:50 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Much truth in your omega and alpha... Warm hugs and smiles across the miles, EA |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Real nice poem Arthur. I like your style. Good luck!! mysticpoe |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
Nice, very nice. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully expressed, Arthur! I'd love to see this in the book! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
A very lovely piece....much enjoyed!!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful write! got my vote! |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Arthur, I really enjoy your poetry and this is no exception. It has my vote! 2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2 |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful!! Charisma |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
a most positive write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
very good! |
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Lynda Member
since 2003-04-26
Posts 52Vic, Australia |
Another poem appreciated Arthur. Lynda |
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