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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State 
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Iniquity Sheathed, her wistful soul weeps Desperate for a hearts resolve Aching for what’s in minds-eye Images she bids to evolve With chance as her only promise And a moment her only assist She grasps for what she sees But cannot reach in the midst Paralyzed with heavy aberration Hopelessness takes its aim So deep with in her dreams It stakes its devastating claim Sorely she drinks her anguish Accepts the poison she’s bestowed And in the belly of torment Her misery slowly erodes Blinded from iniquity that looms Deafened by her silent cries And still her only comfort Comes with it's just demise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
been lookin' fer you gal... and I like the inner deliberation of this. and, yap...reminding myself now to click the box...jeez, I'm bad...  hugs you. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thoughtful, well written. Joyce |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) Oh Sheri, I am glad you have joined in too with your wonderful poetry, dearest friend, this is heartaching and sadly we must accept the scrapes as they will only ducate us until the best comes for us all! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send many angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sheri, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
the dark and quiet hopelessness this conveys made me sit back and blink. Not often that happens. Heavy heavy words ..and certainly vote worthy There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
bout time you got in here, sheesh..talk about fashionably late  lolYou've penned a melancholy masterpiece and a emotionally powerful piece...tis been too long since I read you. Gotta get this in the book. Very well done poetess Sheri. "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
It has been proven that acceptance is the hardest drink of all. Thank you, and, well done. Peace is the only battle worth waging. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi,there Irie! Good to read you again! Iniquity?!? Aye, there's the rub! Great write! Love & Light, EA |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Irie ~ Well written, powerful piece ~ Bonnie |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
This is beautifully penned and I am happily voting for it. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH! I'm glad to be back, and it seems just in time! Off to read more ..... Love & Peace to All ~Sheri |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I'm glad you made it to the book, but how could this piece not make it. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
SHERI!!  now. . .I know that this one's already been accepted. . . great job. . . but, I just had to tell you how well done it is. . . great work. . . where've you been?? don't be a stranger, eh? ---------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (04-16-2003 10:05 PM).] |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Gads! I didn't get a chance to vote for this. Nice to see an infrequent Irie post. |
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T Member
since 2000-04-27
Posts 107USA |
Awesome...Gothic...Excellent. T. |
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