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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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Take me back to yesterday, or even the days before to sunshine and to happiness and maybe something more Today is not my day you know, today is dark and gray and even if you smile at me, I won't come out to play Take me back to yesterday, when I was a little child I could roam the pastures then, full of flowers wild Today is not my day you know, for pastures are no more large buildings placed on land you see, wich was green before Take me back to yesterday, when loved ones weren't dead when I could hear them talking real, not only in my head Today is not my day you know, my head is full of voices constant ordering me around, I have to make some choices Take me back to yesterday and I'll just skip tomorrow and maybe I forget about the gray and dark and sorrow Today is not my day you know, but you can change that fast if you'll take me back to yesterday, I'm sure I'll make it last Like scattered leaves...my words will flow [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (04-03-2003 03:18 PM).] |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
I know, I know, I had it here before and Marge was angry that I had it removed, so to please her, here it is again.  MargigirlTitia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Sometimes it seems like all my friends are and family are leaving, and going somewhere without me. Yesterday can be very attractive. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I';m glad I enjoyed my yesterdays when I had them. I love this. Joyce |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear friend, I will take you back to yesterday! I am waving my magic wand... Swoosh! Swoosh! Swoosh! ........Let me know when you want to come back to your tomorrows! Love & Light, Linda P.S. I loved your poem!!!  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LOL ! Me no 'angry' ... me just think it's B E A U T I M O U S ! too~Ka-Chink !!! *Huglets* ~*Me ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Titia, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you have a golden heart and it shines through these tough times as I wish I could have lived in the days that I never even got to see! (wipes tears) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, I send friendship hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my YES! I remember this..and I love it! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Take me back to yesterday and I'll just skip tomorrow Haven't we all had days like this... I especially liked your closing line. Well done Titia~ |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
 Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I cant take you back..but I can vote "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
I'm so glad that you did bring this back for I have not had the pleasure of reading it until now. You have such a lyrical quality to your words. The flow is natural and the rhyming superb. Theme is constant and continuously revealing in thought and mood. A most appealing and somewhat sad perspective. Very nice. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
This wonderful write makes me want some yesterday too Titia ~ "Today is not my day you know, today is dark and gray and even if you smile at me, I won't come out to play" ~ Just love this! Bonnie |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Titia, i remember this from Open..liked it then and like it now |
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lorenlynn Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 203California Beaches |
 Voted! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks for all your lovely answers dear friends. Sometimes yesterdays should be kept, but sometimes they'd better be gone fast. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
many to you, Titia...glad you put this back in... regards, sudhir |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
great write! take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
May I come with you, Titia... For I have felt this way myself... Bless your heart. |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
Great style: clear and unambiguously wishful thinking, but expressed in such a lyrical manner and with apt images. The tone is unashamedly nostalgic, but there is a sense of reality created because the tone is also quite calm. I am so glad that you re-posted because I enjoyed the read and related to its theme. I'm off to vote! Patrick Talty |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I enjoyed this immensely the first time I read it, and equally so today. (I'm hearing the tune "Yesterday") |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
wonderfully wistful poem JThere is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I remember Marge's challenge well, Titia... and you met it so very well. *S* This is beautiful and poignant... and one to be read again and again. *S* It's got my vote! *S* |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well now glad it is back! And I miss you around in here, what are you up to? Don't be too hard on yourself - even Einstein had trouble tying his shoelaces. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Glad you reposted Titia I can vote now  Maree. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks for all your votes. Sharon, I've been up to my neck in sheepbusiness and photographybusiness, LOL I have only 24 hours a day, of wich I spend only some 4 or 5 a night in bed  Didn't you see me swirl around? Hitting a button here and there? But after reading 5 or 6 poems in a row, my head started spinning so I decided to only read and hit the button if I liked it. And then two custom officers picked me up, but that's another story. You can read all about it in open. Geesh, again it's almost 4.00 am already. Think I'll take the day off tomorrow or I will grant everybody a return of money when I see their tax applications LOL and that won't please my boss I gather. Titia Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Beautiful post. I can do nothing about yesterday but today I can vote on this and happy to do so. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
*Sigh* Ah yes, the good ol' days! Thanks for the reminder Titia! ~Sheri |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I always enjoy this one when I read it....Is this one that got lost in the crash...cuz, I really thought I already voted for this??? Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Very nice penned Titia, enjoyed the read Charisma |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm sure glad Marge made you put it back, Titia! Fabulous expression! |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Wonderful. What everybody else said. Enjoyed. Hugs, Pat ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Titia you've done it again!!! Great poem!! a Dutch click! Neeraja |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks friends, don't know if it's getting in, but thanks anyway for your support and votes. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
BUMP! |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
Take me back too Mams Life on the internet begins at...90! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ This is worth a  just to see Momma Muys had a chance to come in and reply~ Miss you both soooooo much! My love sent on :huglets: ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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