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The Warmth Of Him |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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And the warmth of him.... bringing in the logs for the long cold winter and making me tremble with the promise in his eyes ... of later walking barefoot through dark, silent woods green fir trees..dark brown eyes shiny black braids bride red feathers turquoise beads smoky prayers around a campfire..my fine white horse swifter than the north wind! and the warmth of him strong, handsome brave and favourite of the Sun god soft hot breath against my breast lips murmuring arms clinging, blood churning loins burning while the rain beat gentle on the tent near the lake and the pale Moon faded into dawn at the moment when the wild birds cry and the warmth of him. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so beautiful I have to give it a vote.  Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, I would have definitely picked this one out as a keeper, had you let me... wait, I already did! |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
nice arthur |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy, even the title warms me up on this extremely cold day---mind you, it sounds like he might do a much better job of warming me up---I mean a much better job of warming YOU up! tehe ~ Keep the home fires burnin' Linda |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I love this one, Nancy. It's beautiful. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
How can I not love this..You do this subliminal passion so well!!! Hugs..and a vote. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Great poem - great images - wonderful feelings - loved it - Paul |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very warm, this gives a wonderfully passionate feeling. I want one just like him. Sandra |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Leigh girl, only you can put such magic in your words. Very lovely...very gentle smile |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, goodness, Karilea, this is a very good one that you picked for the book. Very romantic....  Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very romantic |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I just love this, sweet friend, this made me smile and this is perfect for the new book, yay! (kiss on cheek) I knew you'd join in, hip-hip hooray, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
 Beautiful images and emotions blended in this poem,Enchantress...the sensuality of this write is stirring...it has my vote..believe in what your heart feels... |
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*Stubby* Member
since 2002-09-19
Posts 122 |
Avery special warmth very nice J *S* |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Good choice to submit. I really like this!!  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Nancy Lee, Finally, I found our common bond! Way cool. Gets my vote. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I love the feel of this |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
walking barefoot through dark, silent woods green fir trees..dark brown eyes shiny black braids bride red feathers turquoise beads smoky prayers around a campfire..my fine white horse swifter than the north wind! and the warmth of him strong, handsome brave and favourite of the Sun god soft hot breath against my breast lips murmuring arms clinging, blood churning loins burning while the rain beat gentle on the tent near the lake and the pale Moon faded into dawn at the moment when the wild birds cry =============================== exquisite imagery...so sensually stunning. Now...how bout that one about his hands being butterflies  " ... And think not, that you can direct the course of love ... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Yes! Love it! you have my vote! Maree |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
much enjoyed the 'adventure' here [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-19-2003 12:36 AM).] |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Exquisitely romantic and full of red blooded passion... Has a kind of close to nature feel to it that really adds to the mood I think. Enjoyed reading this poem very much and your poem gets a vote from me for sure. GOD bless. -Bob |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
you know, roses are red violets are blue .. yata yatta yatta? welll .. forget that, this knocks it out of the way. totally! |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
voting. [sorry] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
oh yes... lovely poem, this one... great choice... regards, Sudhir |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
like it a lot Charisma |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes, by all means this should be in the book. I love this one!! hugs, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Transfer of fire to skin. |
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Chrissypooh Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 80Canada |
beautiful |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very nice indeed.... Yep I agree with above.....a keeper!!!![This message has been edited by Justbleu (02-19-2003 06:38 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done nancy.. as always... I enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmyes. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Nancy, this warms me heart and soul and frozen piggies! Great job ... huggles, Marti |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Great choice for the Hot section.  You do this so well Nancy! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Reads like music. Ed |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I read I left - forgot to vote LOL, came back, read, almost left, saw I forgot to even comment the last time Mrs. Romance, you surely DO get my vote. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Nancy ~~~WOW~~~ I felt the goosebumps rising on my arms and legs as I read this.... This is steamier than a lake at dawn.... ~~~SSSS~~~~ sizzling!!! The last line of the poem stands out for me ~~~incredible climax~~~ The lake isn't the only thing that has steam rising from it here!!!! Gorgeous!!! Sherry Cherish the good memories of the past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow. But above all... be kind to yourself today. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
As inviting as a warm sweater in February. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Certainly brings out the warmth in me...as does all of your work VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE!!!! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nancy - and the warmth of you, what would this book be without one of your fabulous writings? BC |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I think I want to ditto serenity! LOL This is beautiful! *S* |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A beautiful poem indeed. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Warm, warmer, warmest! *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Beautiful! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Nancy Lee, sorry that I called you by the wrong name in my reply earlier. HeeHee!! I must have read Karilea's poem right before I did yours or something. I don't know. You know I am kinda goofy  sometimes...LOL Heart Hugs, Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (02-24-2003 10:58 AM).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
A toasty warm read, NancyLee... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nance... You will always have my vote....for each piece you write is always a treasure. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I love the way you can instantly transport the reader to different settings so quickly and seamlessly in this poem. It's very fantastic and mystical. I hope it gets into the book. "If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderful POem! Liz |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is gorgeous, Nancy! So romantic! Off to vote! |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
I most gladly cast my vote in favor of this poem being included in the book. paladin |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
You get my vote... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
I love the thought of promises in his eyes of later..*grins* anyways enchanting as always.. If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Enchantress~ Lovely words and thoughts. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I believe that I will also keep this one. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Of course, one for the book! Pure poetry. One of my favorites from your quill, Nancy. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is soooo lovely.....very magical Nancy... hugsssssLauren~ Take me where the tides start |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This one glows with warmth from beginning to end, and my vote is gladly cast!! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Beautiful. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Nancy, as usual, is so beautiful. I always enjoy reading your poems. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You created a wonderful, stirring atmosphere. Beautiful. Love, Margherita |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
This one definitly makes the book. Very nice. |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
*sigh* Gorgeous. Thanks for sharing. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Beautiful. You have my vote Dawn |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I Like!! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
 another look is deserved by this wonderful write!!!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
So romantic and descriptive...I could see him bringing in the logs.  It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Very beautiful.It beckons one to be lost in another's moccasins and brings to mind, "Dances With Wolves".Very nice. Peace,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, I concur with all. Nicely done. You seem to outdue yourself each time I read you. SG |
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Red Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143Ca |
I always read your writing but don't comment that often but this time I will so that I can vote for your poem and commend you for being an excellent writer.  |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
You combine gentleness and passion and create such an explosion.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Nancy - once again - bringing me to that place i so long to be TY xxoo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 I want to pop in here and thank each and every one of you who chose this piece to read..took the time to respond, and voted for this to be in the new Reflections book. Never ever did I believe less than two years ago I would grow so close to so many people here at this wonderful place I call my second home. Thank you Ron Carnell for inviting us into your home, and even moreso for your untiring dedication to the site and in putting this book 'Reflections' together. God bless you all...and to all of you.. ...Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Nancy I am sorry it took me so long to get to this one but I am sure glad I did for it was simply stunning. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nance~ Can't think of a better time to  this one up~  May John be made stronger~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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