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With Angel Breath |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
With angel breath I whisper words, Softly of my love, A gentle kiss Upon your brow, Gives rise to cooing dove. The warmth we share Will fill the night, With nectar sweet and fine, We'll wake at dawn To drink again, Of love's inebrious wine. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely. Joyce |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Pretty and i learnt a new word "inebrious" and enjoyed the analogy Of love's inebrious wine |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Joyce ~ "Lovely" coming from a poetess such as yourself, is a "lovely" reply! Thank you! Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
kaile ~ I'm pleased that you learned a new word from my poem! I certainly have learned several myself from reading the poems of fellow Pipsters! I appreciate your thoughtful reply! Love & Light, Linda |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Linda, when you write a love poem, you REALLY write a hot love poem. Phew!!!! Hugs and smiles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marti ~ What can I say?!? I love "Love" in all its forms... ---and I "loved" your thoughtful reply! Love & Light! Linda |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
What a tender brush of your pen EA ~ This is simply beautiful ~ Bonnie |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Bonnie ~ What a sweet and poetic reply! Thank you! ~ May love light up your world!... Linda |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Lovely!! Charisma |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Charisma ~ Thank you, Dear One, for the "lovely" reply! Love & Light, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Linda..much enjoyed! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi! Nancy! Thanks for dropping by and leaving such a "lovely" reply! Love & Light, Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Linda, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, I love your angelic poems as they always radiate with such light and romance! (kiss on cheek) Yay, this is beautiful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, my sweet friend, I love receiving your thoughtful and enthusiastic replies! Luvs & Hugs, Linda |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Love that last line...well done poetess Linda!! "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
JM ~ You calling me a poetess, is indeed an honor! Thank YOU, POETESS Janet! Warm hugs, Linda |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A fine wine you're pouring here Linda dear. Kind of made me drowsy and dreamy eyed! Really nice poem~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BluesSerenade ~ Ooo! I loved your mellow jello reply! Love & Light, Linda |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
A most passionate and intimate embrace. With an angel's breath and gentle kiss upon the brow...to me that speaks of such a closeness and connection that cannot be matched for its genuine affection and feeling. Lovely Linda. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Waldopepper ~ By your sweet, sensitive and gentle reply, it appears to me that you are a sweet, sensitive and gentle soul...Thank you for the kind words. Love & Light, Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Earth Angel - an angel's breath, a kiss on my brow, what more could a man ask for? My vote... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ ...a gentle kiss upon thine brow for a reply as sweet as inebrious wine... Love & Light, EA |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Linda, beautiful write!! and such a lovely name you have...its both my sisters and mom's... take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Amy ~ Thank you for the "beautiful" reply! Give hugs to your lovely Mom and sister for me--and keep one for yourself! Love & Light, Linda |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is a very beautiful poem, I hope to see it in Reflections. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lost Dreamer ~ Why, thank you! Your vote is making your "hope" one step closer to becoming a reality! Love & Light, EA |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Pour me a glass, Linda...I'll sip slowly |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I love the sensual quality of this, quite lovely, Linda, tender. You've got my vote! : |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Linda - you once said to me: From my wings to yours . . . and here - you are flying - this is beautiful xxoo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Balladeer ~ Oh, yes...sip sloooowly...then sip with zip!!! Lovin' hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Auguste ~ "Sensuous" --the very word itself elicits a sensuous response from me... I like to have all "6" senses engaged in all that I do! Thank you! Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
littlewing ~ That was a very sweet thing for you to say--and you would be a wonderful companion to fly with! Love & hugs, EA |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PoetFriendEarthAngel, compliments2u on a most exquisite write... This poem is precious... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
PoetFriendCocoBaci ~ Thank you kindly! ~ and hugs2u2! Love & Light, EA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
bump |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
BC ~ That bump felt sooooo good! As you may recall, this was the poem that I had written as a reply to one of your poems! So if this poem makes it into the book (my wings are crossed!), you will be partly responsible! Warm hugs, Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So tender and loving... so... you. *S* I like this very much, angelic one... *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern ~ That was a very sweet, and thoughtful thing for you to say ~ and that my dear poet friend, is soooooooo YOU! Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
How on earth did I miss this one? Love it, so gentle and touching. Very vote worthy. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
SPIRIT ~ Just seeing your name makes me smile! Thank you for your kind response. Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Earth Angel, your words are very eloquent. Nice poem. Good luck!! mysticpoe |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern ~ ...and what a lovely bump it is! Huggums, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
mysticpoe ~ Thank you on both accounts! Warm hugs, EA |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Earth Angel! Lovely expression! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Denise ~ ...and I appreciate your "expression" as well! Thank you for the lovely comment! ~ May you receive love, and be a giver of it, with every rising of the moon... Warm hugs, Linda |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Linda, Ya just had to get that "angel" into the title didncha?...LOL A very passionate poem.. voting... Sherry |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah, where was this one hiding from me? |
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pjtalty Member
since 2002-07-17
Posts 111W.A., Australia |
Dear Linda, Apart from the soft and gentle evocative imagery of this poem, it has a virtue with which many poets (including yours truly) find difficult to ornament their poetry: that of brevity. Ralph Waldo Emerson, in his preface to *Parnassus* (1875) praised such a virtue in these terms: "Poetry teaches the enormous force of a few words, and, in proportion to the inspiration, checks loquacity." I think he would have admired your poem -as I do! Regarding the use of the word *inebrious*: it is not listed in my copy of the Concise Oxford Dictionary of Current English -seventh Edition (1987). However, I am quite happy to accept it as a new word on the following grounds: (1) Common usage is ultimately decided by readers, writers and speakers of English; (2) If this poem appears in the anthology (which it definitely should), then it will be read by multitudes of English speaking people throughout the world and, as a result, will come into common usage and, therefore, be included in a future edition of standard English dictionaries. Finally, congratulations on creating such a touching love poem. My vote is in! Patrick Talty [This message has been edited by pjtalty (04-26-2003 04:59 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Patrick ~ Your reply was so eloquent, gracious and flattering, that I may even frame it and hang it on the wall of my study! There is a word "inebrius" which means intoxicated, but I wanted intoxicating so I took poetic licence and made it "inebrious"! You caught me! Thank you for such a thoughtful response! Love, Light & Literature! Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (04-27-2003 12:47 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sherry ~ You've gotta cute sense of humor! I like that! Thank you! Luvs and hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
passing shadows ~ Voila! My poem came from outta the shadows and into the light! Warm hugs, EA |
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