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ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

0 posted 2003-03-27 06:23 AM

Deep with in,

The heart of,

My heart,

There flourishes,

An immortal rose,

Blooming with,

Vibrant pink,

And emanating,

The fragrance,

Filled with love.

But color of rose,

Is of thou lips.

That fragrance is,

Of thou breathe.

And that rose,

Is thou.

And I know,

I am there,

In thou heart,

As thou,

Are in mine.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-03-27 06:44 AM

Welcome to Passions, Ambrish!
Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - If I whisper, will you listen?...

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

2 posted 2003-03-27 08:24 AM

Lovely post - very sweet and nice. I voted.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-03-27 09:27 AM

Welcome to Passions! Your poem whispered of sweet love......

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-03-27 07:59 PM

(big hugggsssssss) This is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, this made me smile and may the rose in your heart always bloom with smiles, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

5 posted 2003-03-29 01:04 AM

Welcome to the Blue Pages! Passions is a geat place to skip about

hug, g

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people" - victor borge

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

6 posted 2003-03-29 05:23 PM

lovely... a nice introduction to your work

~A~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2003-03-29 10:48 PM

Hi, welcome to Passions. This is a rose scented beauty.
Sandra

Angel
Senior Member

since 1999-07-02

Posts 551
Pennsylvania

8 posted 2003-03-29 11:23 PM

Welcome to Passions! This made me sigh, it was so sweet. Wonderful job.

www.enterthemuse.com

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

9 posted 2003-03-31 04:25 PM

There is someone who makes me feel just this way.....LOVED IT!!!!
Bridgette

Looks like you're knew around here....
Welcome to Passions!!!!!

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2003-04-02 08:32 PM

Very well done.

Welcome to Passions!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

11 posted 2003-04-05 11:08 AM

welcome to passions...

lovely write!
take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

12 posted 2003-04-11 01:43 PM

ambrish, immortal rose, I like this poem very much!! Good luck!!

mysticpoe

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

13 posted 2003-04-13 12:26 PM

Already voted but this is just a little bump.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

14 posted 2003-04-15 12:40 PM

good piece of work!

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