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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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~ I Wonder ~ Will you gaze upon my face and remember when the eternity embers burned for us that night, telescoping time, and making Life rhyme. And will we one day recall... only a part, perhaps not all of the knowledge so hard earned, the lonely tears we cried the hurt we hid inside and the Karmic lessons learned only to forget again, through foolish pride? I wonder [This message has been edited by Enchantress (03-26-2003 02:03 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Dear Enchantress. Love to vote for your enchanting poetry. Joyce |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
I asked for passion I got passion arthur |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
would love to read this one in the book for sure.....got my vote  Charisma |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
WOW!!! This poem spoke personally to me.... sometimes things are only too clear in retrospect... and you can only pray there is time to begin again, forgive, renew. "telescoping time, Making life rhyme" I loved the view I got of this! My vote is cast! (((Hug))) Sherry |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
A most intriguing meditation and a most inspiring write. Though I do believe that love is eternal, I too often wonder how much or how little we will truly remember or how much memory will hold importance in the years to come... I think you've written another most fabulous anthology worthy poem here my friend. God Bless. -Bob |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nancy - when we do, I will. Most lovely writing as you do. My vote for you... BC |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I will remember...and never let the shining moments tarnish...they are locked securely in my soul...thank you for sharing this profond poem...your talent for giving voice to feelings continues to amaze me..  believe in what your heart feels... |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Of course I believe that everything you write is worthy of being in the book and this one is certainly no exception. My vote? Absolutely! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
when the eternity embers burned for us that night, telescoping time, and making Life rhyme. I love these lines especially... and hope some things are never forgotten. *S* |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is outstanding! Hugs Sandra |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is awesome Nancylee!! hugs!! "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
the lonely tears we cried the hurt we hid inside You omitted the line that tells us that the scars of the hurt sometimes stay...and stay Can I stuff the ballot box?? Vote..vote..vote. Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Very nice Enchantress, Vote is in. SG |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
words of wisdom & poetic ponderances set to rhymes divine and alliterations added in.. the moth is giddy   "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Yep, this I like, very pretty.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..a vote...and a word to say...excellent |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) I wonder ever so many things and wish to at least feel some epiphany to some of my most intimate questions and ventures! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, you have my karmic vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nancy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
BEAUTIFUL, Nancy Lee...  (me voting) LOL Heart Hugs, Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, those karmic lessons--when will we ever learn?... Lovely and insightful write... Love & Light, Linda |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Of course you have my vote.I am so proud of you. paladin |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
just great Nancy - the book will be better - Paul |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
All of which brought you to today. Hmmm. Lovely, not painless, but lovely! Voting now. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
This one twists and turns and curves.  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Nancy--You wonder so beautifully! Voting! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Ohhhhh I'm so happy I got this chance to read this post you've shared4the book... Compliments to you on a splendid write Sweetie... Smiles2u *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (03-29-2003 08:30 AM).] |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
Bittersweet, painfully touching, and oh so very true. Wonderful words Nancy. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hmm, we can always hope... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Lovely wonderings...  |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
fantastic..... Lauren~ I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhhh such beautiful ponderings Enchantress ~ simply lovely. Bonnie |
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Chrissypooh Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 80Canada |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And will we one day recall... only a part, perhaps not all of the knowledge so hard earned, the lonely tears we cried the hurt we hid inside and the Karmic lessons learned only to forget again, through foolish pride? **************************** Who you calling foolish? LOL This is a wonderful submission for the book and I am proud to cast a vote for sure on this one. I loved the rhyme and you dropped in some very effective alliterations as well. Very nicely done. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
telescoping time, I wonder too how I will look back, when it's all said and done~ Hugs Nancy~ you know I love this! |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Enchantress, a wonderful poem!! Good luck!! mysticpoe |
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