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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State 
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Ever Changing Love The dawn of love, so magical and new, Two bodies set aflame with burning kiss. Enchanted world, and only for the two, No other pair has ever loved like this. Young love, a wonder while its passions last, Must change its form if love's to long endure. Too soon the thrill of love, once new, is past. It should condense to essence now, more pure. At times love's embers start a blazing flame, Soon cooling down to just a lovely glow. No need for these to play a youthful game, Their dreams fulfilled as both of them now know. For though the young and foolish long for fire, The glowing embers, wiser hearts desire. Joyce Johnson |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) I have never held loves hand, and may not know everything about love, but I too desire ever so much to just feel the embers for once as I too believe that is the way love should be and no matter what as the flame grows, the embers must never be extinguished! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, you have my vote, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joyce, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautifully done...the telling of love through the years. ~Hugs and a vote~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OH but I smile...and gladly cast my vote. This is something I am just beginning to understand...hugs to you for this. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
At times love's embers start a blazing flame, Soon cooling down to just a lovely glow. No need for these to play a youthful game, Their dreams fulfilled as both of them now know. For though the young and foolish long for fire, The glowing embers, wiser hearts desire. Wonderful thoughts Joyce. This gets my vote.  [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (03-15-2003 07:38 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Joyce, this is so beautiful. I love it. It truly takes this for love to endure for years, I believe. "Love makes the world go around" |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
As ususal, your work is lovely. Eliza Simmons |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Joyce.. not only is this so truly beautiful it made me sigh. I am not one for rhyming but when I read rhythm and rhyme as this I simply melt. I wish I could write like this. You have my vote. Maree  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Just beautiful, Joyce. I always enjoy reading you, and this time was no exception.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Joyce I am so delighted to see an entry from you with such a beautiful rhythm to it. Loved the content of this one, good luck. |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Beautifully said indeed. Enjoyed. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Joyce Johnson, You write well of the "Eros". I wanted to pick a favorite line but, in examining this poem I would have had to copy each line for each is so well said and constructed. I hope this does go in the book. Certainly, a fan of his one! SimplyGold |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Oops! I got so enthused that I forgot to vote. Here it is SG |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
As usual a lovely post. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is beautiful. It reminds me of my Grandparents. Dawn |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This poem is very wise. I think it is something for young people (myself included) to remember. I'll keep this in my library so I can remind myself of this from time to time. Thank you Joyce, you have my vote.  Elizabeth It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got... |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Yes...enchantment! I like. *s |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Absolutely gorgeous,Joyce!But more than that,it is so eloquently wise.This,in my opinion is an instant classic,one that will stand the test of time in concordance with your subject matter.My definite vote and a "Keeper" for me. Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Your writes are always so beautiful Joyce. My vote for sure. Jason |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Thanks to all of you dear people for your kind comments. Love, Joyce |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
This is lovely and I voted. Love reading all these great writes. |
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dhicks03 Member
since 2002-12-26
Posts 267Missouri,USA |
Wow, simply beautiful. Vote cast! |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Nice poem again Joyce, I realized that the vote is automatic when you submit the reply. Just one of those days. Good luck with the book! mysticpoe |
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