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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) 
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Amidst the tears and pain Vanishing hopes are gone and flew away Up above through twilight Shadows cast across the floor Reflections of the past Trembling thoughts of one Dwelling deep within the soul A mystical sense of reality Captured by the craze All in bewilderment Of the shock in the wave Creatures of the dimness Chattering amongst the green Everything slows in stillness What is this we see???? "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown [This message has been edited by Justbleu (03-25-2003 02:12 AM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Wild!!! Joyce |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You captured that time, and these times, perfectly. |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Though a sad reality, still I think that your poem will be a nice tribute to the recent terror attacks. Very descriptive poetry that like the actual events of terror leaves some very strong mind imagages to ponder. A vote from me. -Bob |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Bridgette, I agree wholeheartedly with Robert, dearest friend, this would be a perfect hug for all those victimized by 9/11 and by this war in the Middle East and I pray everyone worldwide can find that light of hope and security through the smoky bewilderment! (sad sigh) I send extra warm angel hugs and my sympathetic vote your way, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bridgette, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Justbleu...this is very cool...somewhat haunting. I enjoyed the read.  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
Powerfully sad words my friend. And yet it provides a moving tribute to those whose lives are laid waste in the senselessness of terror. Truly an artist's view. Well done. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Amazing write, I certainly had to vote on this. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This does haunt... and provokes thinking. *S* Excellent work! *S* |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I love to make people think and to hear the different interpretations..... Thank You all for your comments!!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So many images are conjured with this clever surreal write... could be read as storms or tornado or as others have said, war or attack... haunting and vivid poetess Bleu, well done. "and when we get to the pearly gates ... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes, this will make one think. You paint in Dali strokes here. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have spoken of horrific happenings with thoughtful eloquence... Peace & Light, EA |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bridgette, Yup, this makes you think and reflect. Voting now. Nice. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Great tribute to that day, and a great poem. You've got my vote |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic write! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is different, and good. I like the sounds in the poem, and the scenes. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Great write Justbleu ~ provokes thought, with some haunting images ~ enjoyed! Bonnie |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A terrific write Justbleu....great imagery and sound. Maree |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I'm thinking about your last question! This was thought provoking, bewildering, in a good way! Pretty, bleu~ |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very great write, and written well "one needs not challenge all the players to win the game" |
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