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zenny
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0 posted 2003-03-24 06:44 AM



Surrounding cold
no body to hold

no warmth close to me

Eager to warm
to appeal and charm

Passion, their should be

Strong loving force
enlighten dark course

Love, concede my plea

Freely I'll love
move heavens above

Warmth shall surround me



© Copyright 2003 Kelly Verbeeck - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 2003-03-24 10:17 AM


I like the formatting to this piece and it's happy end...yep, I'm voting
Local Parasite
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2 posted 2003-03-24 12:50 PM


Nicely written for the short length.  You've done a good job squeezing a good bit of content into such a restrictive format.  I like the shortness of the couplets, it flows very quickly.

I vote.  

Parasite

"Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true.
~ Friedrich Wilhelm Nietzsche

Flower
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since 2003-03-15
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3 posted 2003-03-24 01:21 PM


How nice this is. I am voting.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-03-24 02:44 PM




(smiles) Oh Kelly, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, true warmth will find your heart and love will answer your pleas! (kiss on cheek) I too love this unique format, dearest friend, your emotions bottle up so well this way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kelly, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29
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California Desert
5 posted 2003-03-24 02:51 PM


Interesting little write - I liked it. Happily voting here.
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
6 posted 2003-03-25 07:51 PM


Kelly - this is lovely - we should all have that warmth - can relate to it so much - xxoo
Nan
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7 posted 2003-03-26 08:28 AM


Nice warm thoughts, Kelly...
Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle
8 posted 2003-03-26 09:45 AM


Yes... warmth wins over the cold.
Very nice, Zenny.

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

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9 posted 2003-03-27 12:29 PM


Love the need in this, even as it wishes for what may be dark things.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2003-03-27 12:31 PM


Wonderful warm thoughts.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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