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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium 
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Surrounding cold no body to hold no warmth close to me Eager to warm to appeal and charm Passion, their should be Strong loving force enlighten dark course Love, concede my plea Freely I'll love move heavens above Warmth shall surround me |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like the formatting to this piece and it's happy end...yep, I'm voting  |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Nicely written for the short length. You've done a good job squeezing a good bit of content into such a restrictive format. I like the shortness of the couplets, it flows very quickly. I vote. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
How nice this is. I am voting. Love reading all these great writes. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Kelly, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, true warmth will find your heart and love will answer your pleas! (kiss on cheek) I too love this unique format, dearest friend, your emotions bottle up so well this way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kelly, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Interesting little write - I liked it. Happily voting here. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kelly - this is lovely - we should all have that warmth - can relate to it so much - xxoo |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice warm thoughts, Kelly...  |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Yes... warmth wins over the cold. Very nice, Zenny. When you think you have heard it all, |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Love the need in this, even as it wishes for what may be dark things. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful warm thoughts. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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