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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
Searching for Love There was a woman And she searched for love She was dilegent in her search But could not find love She asked other women "Have you found love?" Some had and were content Others had not and also searched "We have also looked for love, but he is not here" So she left and seached again She searched in the hills and valleys In the streets and market places But she could not find love And she sat by the road side And she wept because she was alone And without love And a stranger came to her and said "I have been looking for you everywhere!" And she gathered up her things And followed him Arthur |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very interesting write Micheal.. Actually this has many layers... Going back for another read,... This is a keeper m'friend. Hugs across the pond. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Flower Member
since 2003-03-15
Posts 240California |
Interesting - reminded me a bit of a 'fairy tale'. Love reading all these great writes. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
This was neat... I agree that it had dual meanings...either religious, or a love story. Great job! |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Like this... a cute, simple story, with a trailling conclusion. Nicely done. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Michael, this is lovely, sweet friend, your wonderful words always make me smile and it made me smile to see the man take her by the hand, yay! (big hugggssssssss) I love this, sweet friend, yay for happy endings, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
What a lovely tale - very delightful and gets my vote. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This was a really cool way to express a woman finding love!!!! Enjoyed!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this put a smile on my face |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like this one. It's deceptively simple. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
She also finds love who only sits and waits. Very nice. Joyce |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good ending.  [This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-06-2003 02:24 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wonderful poem with a very important message! Enjoyed! Warm hugs, EA |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
great write...reminds me that love finds you! take care. amy p.s. you got my vote. "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Bump...... "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Lynda Member
since 2003-04-26
Posts 52Vic, Australia |
Are you still writing Arthur? This poem sounds lost Lynda |
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