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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
“MOONLIGHT RAINBOWS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I wonder why I feel like I do at times, when I walk with you holding hands, it’s a feeling I have deep inside me, my beating heart calls, as it expands… A path we follow through the forest, listening to sounds of the warm night, all I want is to hold you close again, for you to whisper things are alright… Time seems to flow slower, as we stroll, gentle whispers shared, words spoken, faces meet tenderly one to another, vows to each other, never to abandon… Moonlight rainbows seen in the dark, into the evening they seem to stay, see the shadows gather into darkness, yet fear not, for I will not leave away… ~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (02-15-2003 03:33 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(does happy dance) Oh Bill, I knew all along this would be a brilliant submission for Reflections, and you did add it, yay! (smiles) You have my vote on this, the troubadour croons again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (02-15-2003 03:29 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Bill, all your love poems would have my vote for the book....... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
A very pretty image. Makes me want to go for a stroll in the woods. Nice writing. Parasite "Faith" means the will to avoid knowing what is true. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bill... Enjoyed very much. Smooth as always...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's always very soothing to read one of your poems. They put a smile on my face. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I always look for your poetry. Beautiful and so sentimental. Joyce |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How romantic.. Moonlight rainbows... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Seems you found your treasure at the end of the rainbow. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
BC, I'm so glad that you added this one here! It's a wonderful work of art, and a pleasure for the romantic in all of us! Accept these small gifts from my gypsy soul, and let the magik happen! ~~S~~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Time seems to flow slower, as we stroll, gentle whispers shared, words spoken, faces meet tenderly one to another, vows to each other, never to abandon…" always, your words are so lovely |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Loved it! Anyone can write, But only poets can capture the heart. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem has three important ingredients that tickle my fancy: #1. Moonlight #2. Rainbows #3. Poet: BC----and not necessarily in that order! tehe May your world be full of moonlight and rainbows, EA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is a lovely picture, Bill. Sandra |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
It would not be a good book without at least one from one of Passions' masters of Romance. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, You are a man of romantic proportions. I can't help but think of a trail throught the redwoods when reading this. Excellent write. I'm voting now. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
BC...you are such the romantic |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Bill, I thoroughly enjoyed the pleasant walk. *s |
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angsana Member
since 2002-11-11
Posts 77 |
Bill, you write such lovely, romantic poems! angsana |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
and the award for PiP's most romantic is, [drumroll] .. .. bill charles. casting my vote now. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you are such a romanticus.......love the way you write Charisma |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
romantic poetry at its best... regards, sudhir |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
What are we going to do when you get too busy to write? This has my vote. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Lovely poem dearFriend... Hugs2u *~coco~* |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Beautiful and romantic, Bill. I enjoyed this. "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your words are chamomile Bill... soothing, sweet, lovely and healing... |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
BC Beautifully written. Love is wonderful when you are with the right person. [This message has been edited by Ariana (02-20-2003 02:10 PM).] |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
We sure will need your romantic touch in there Bill and this gets my vote that is for sure! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is SOOOOO WONDERFUL!!!! Bridgette |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
This is one of those poems that you just got to read aloud. It sings like a beautiful love song. The first three stanzas, as if sung direct to your love, make up the melody and then the last stanza is a lovely refrain. -Bob |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
this sweet ~Every girl has a dream within. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful love poem. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Somebody special has got to like this poem, Bill. Well done. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I love your quiet, introspective style. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I know I can't vote again.....but other people can!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Such a romantic piece - gets my vote for sure. |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
yet fear not, for I will not leave away you have such a tender heart Bill. *s hugss M/~A~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bill - where has this been hiding . . hmmm ?? You are so sweet - this is lovely . . . xxoo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So beautiful and romantic... I like this very much, Bill! *S* |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
I am charmed by your words as always. You have my vote. Tammy |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Well Bill, I have finally found the man I have dreamed of in cyberspace. I can listen to your sweet whispers anytime I want and I don't have to whisper back I love your poetry. SG |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh my gosh Bill ~ do you know how very beautiful this is??? Simply lovely! Bonnie |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so.....magical and all! Love the romance BC~ |
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