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zenny
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since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-03-18 12:40 PM

Natures stomach

Natures stomach growls once more
now an eagle decided to hunt close to the shore
a red alert emerges the silent waterscene
so all preys can hide and hope to not been seen

But the chaos and rhythm betrayes them all
they know soon ones curtains of life will fall
for the eagle prepares his flow on the wind
remorselessly he will not care about this sin

Then a fragment of time he needs for his act
Gracefully he does the job with alot of tact
One life less amongst the preys
only because the law of nature the eagle obeyed

Some moments later, this all is the past
in wildlife these things move on fast
All over again Peace is the queen of the watertide
untill the next eagle comes and again all preys try to hide

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2003-03-18 12:52 PM

Nicely done!

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-03-18 12:54 PM

(big hugggsssssssss) And sadly, so many are threatening to put the eagle out of its habitat where freedom once stood, apparently one bird in the hand is now worth none in the bush? (sad sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, you have my vote, why can't we just be satisfied with the rice and oats, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kelly, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

3 posted 2003-03-18 04:59 PM

Love the poem, and the picture. Nicely done.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-03-19 05:57 PM

Survival of the fittest--and fastest! Well done!

Peace & Light,
Earth Angel

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-03-19 08:45 PM

I love the Eagle...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2003-03-19 10:12 PM

Wow you picked my absolutely favorite picture for you wonderful poem - enjoyed!

Sharon

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

7 posted 2003-03-21 10:29 AM

Awesome poem, Eagles have such a grace about them.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

8 posted 2003-04-05 04:04 AM

nature certainly is fascinating isn't it? ..as is this!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

carol
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since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

9 posted 2003-04-15 10:07 PM

Very good

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

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