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Mistletoe Angel

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Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2003-03-17 12:34 PM

When You Wish Upon A Star
By: Noah Eaton
1/29/02

I
look
up at a
star in the
skies, gleaming
in the evening sky
with grace and beauty,
shimmering with a lucid smile as I make my most desired wish
to the star, it winks at me with a ray of light that shines
through my heart with grace and cheer, laughing
joyfully with love and hope, which leaves
me knowing that someday, this wish
will be granted in reality, and
I smile as I continue to see
this star shine in the sky, this
diamond tear of  the angels of the
heavens rushing     light in my eyes,
filling me with.                .great pure love
as pure.                                           .as gold,
and .                                                           .joy

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (03-17-2003 09:06 AM).]

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-03-17 01:07 AM

Beautifully done, Noah. Love, Joyce

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

2 posted 2003-03-17 09:34 AM

Beautiful, happy to vote for this one agian.
Jason

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

3 posted 2003-03-17 09:40 AM

Noah, this is so beautiful. I am always in awe of poems that have shapes as I have yet to figure out how to do it.

It is my privilege to vote for this wonderful piece. Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-03-17 09:41 AM

YES sidekick!! I love this one!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Flower
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since 2003-03-15

Posts 240
California

5 posted 2003-03-17 10:22 AM

This is so beautifully done. Voted.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Tammy Blessing
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since 2002-08-26

Posts 366
PA

6 posted 2003-03-17 11:05 AM

Wondefully done Noah!!

This is "star-tling" in its beauty and accompanied by wondeful pictures. Happy to vote for you. *Hugs*

Tammy

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

7 posted 2003-03-17 12:10 PM

Noah, this is so wonderful. In word and presentation, it is simply exquisite.

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

8 posted 2003-03-17 01:15 PM

Very very lovely Noah!!!! I do so love to read your poetry!!!!!

You little turkey....you had Ron take "Aerials" off!!!! I really like that poem!!!! Anywayz, I forgive you!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-03-17 02:11 PM

Noah, I loved this on when I read it on Open, and I still love it. Glad that you decided to put it for book submission. You've got my vote..

BTW, I took your suggestion and put "Underneath Velvet Skies" in here.

Hugs,
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (03-17-2003 02:11 PM).]

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

10 posted 2003-03-17 02:32 PM

Excellent job with the shape, I'd have never been able to do the bottom part. I've yet yo figure out the space\word contimum.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Amara
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since 2003-02-23

Posts 158
East of the moon, west of the sun.

11 posted 2003-03-17 04:22 PM

I love the way you present your poems...the pictures, the colours, and shapes...magnificent!

Blessed Be Thee,
Stephanie

Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown]

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2003-03-17 04:47 PM

you know I adore this!

I close my eyes and there in the shadows I see your light
You come to me out of my dreams
Across the night

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

13 posted 2003-03-17 05:17 PM

beautifully penned as always

Charisma

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

14 posted 2003-03-17 07:36 PM

Noah...Tender words from your caring heart. Enjoyed and I love the shape...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

rodger_jr
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since 2000-05-16

Posts 37
Glen Hope, PA

15 posted 2003-03-17 09:22 PM

Noah, very creative...gets a vote from this engineer

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

16 posted 2003-03-18 01:42 PM

I KNOW I voted for this before... but reading it again is a treat... it's beautiful, M'toe! May all your wishes come true! *S*

Balladeer

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17 posted 2003-03-18 11:20 PM

Very beautiful, Noah!

SimplyGold
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Posts 1453

18 posted 2003-03-19 03:24 PM

Noah,

I know I read this before. It is lovely and you have my vote. Amazing!

SG

Street Heart
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since 2002-09-05

Posts 349
Pennsylvania,USA

19 posted 2003-03-27 12:48 PM

Noah,this is gorgeous.I think it so imaginative to have your writing form a star.This offering is not only clever,it is
serenely beautiful,pictures and all.Wish I could vote!

Peace,Geoffrey

If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living.

Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963

christian
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since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

20 posted 2003-03-27 04:22 PM

ingenius. but the star shape kinda gave
it a more 'starry' feel i guess. great
stuff though--like always.

wings of the moon
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since 2003-03-27

Posts 323
Pink bubblegum land

21 posted 2003-03-28 05:23 AM

Wonderful!

awww, sweet friend, you are a

this a beautiful piece indeed...

"more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you"

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

22 posted 2003-03-28 08:19 AM

Noah,

I didn't check but this must have made it into the book, since no place to vote, but I love this and want to tell you how much I like this line:

"diamond tear of the angels"

Great poem, quite beautiful!

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Chelsea
Junior Member

since 2003-03-28

Posts 10
Oregon, USA

23 posted 2003-03-28 11:05 AM

wow the star..that was very cool I love the words how they fit so nicely into the shape of a star..I love stars and this poem...
Love, Chelsea

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

24 posted 2003-03-28 05:11 PM

Noah, I love the way you did this! Perfection.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Angel
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since 1999-07-02

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Pennsylvania

25 posted 2003-03-28 11:50 PM

This is so beautifully (both the words and the image). Lovely!

www.enterthemuse.com

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

26 posted 2003-03-29 03:08 AM

I don't know how I missed this one, Noah, It is beautiful.

Sherry

edh
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since 2003-03-26

Posts 111

27 posted 2003-03-29 04:23 PM

Thanks Noah. Again I see what a fine light of a young man you are.

And all of your hopes and wishes are going to come true sooner than you may think.

leighsa
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since 2003-02-27

Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America

28 posted 2003-03-31 10:08 AM

Noah, This is such a beatiful poem, I have read your poems before and everyone of them touch my heart as if they were suppose to...
I really hope to hear more of new poems very soon...
I voted..
Ashgiel

pjtalty
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since 2002-07-17

Posts 111
W.A., Australia

29 posted 2003-04-10 09:52 PM

Original expression and form of an old idea. The phrase used as the title was originally used as the title for a song in a Walt Disney production. You have creatively elaborated on it through the use of an evocative graphic and soulful words enhanced by an appropriate shape. Worthy of inclusion in the anthology!

Patrick Talty

mysticpoe
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Posts 883

30 posted 2003-04-11 01:52 PM

Real nice poem Noah, good luck!!

mysticpoe

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22

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The Netherlands

31 posted 2003-04-13 09:12 AM

Beautiful done!!!

Neeraja

arthur
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england

32 posted 2003-04-13 11:25 AM

hi Noah
may you get your wish
arthur

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

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In the winds of Cherokee song

33 posted 2003-04-13 12:30 PM

Very beautiful and from one whom has done a few shape poems in his time, I can appreciate the time and effort that went into this piece. Stand up and take a well deserved bow.

aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

34 posted 2003-04-13 12:34 PM

what another beautiful poem from you.

Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

35 posted 2003-04-13 02:25 PM

Wow Noah, don't know how missed this one as it sure is a shining star that is for sure. I have tried these but sure couldn't have ever come close to doing one as beautiful as this one. It is too bad the graphics can't accompany it. Absolutely stunning!

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