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SPIRIT
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0 posted 2003-03-11 10:23 PM


THE COWBOY AND THE MADAM

Seemed sadness and loneliness were his name,
A brave man of indisputable fame.
Two Colts rode so low on his narrow hips
Always a mocking smile lay on his lips.

He had straddled a fence ‘twixt good and bad,
Since he was just such a very young lad.
Though he’d paid his dues for the bad he’d done
And cleaned up his act by age thirty-one.

His two-handed draw was clearly the best
Of anyone, dead or alive, in the West.
He’d been an army scout close to three year,
Then worn a badge, never showed any fear.

As a marshal he earned many a friend,
But they counted for not very much in the end.
For when the chips were down, he’d stood alone,
And a town’s colors were clearly shown.

Too many fights left him battle scarred,
From a barbed wire vest his body was marred.
He wore his life, for all to see, on his face,
‘Twas time to retire to a more peaceful place.

He had money in the bank, a nice piece of land,
To enjoy solitude was what he had planned.
He worked hard, long hours that was alright,
But sadness and loneliness filled the night.

He’d lain with many, but none had his heart
He promised them nothing right from the start.
For he’d loved a girl with long golden hair,
He’d never found another to her to compare.

A rancher’s daughter, sweet Emmy Sue Mae
But her father loathed him, drove him away.
He was young and how it had hurt his pride,
When older, he searched for her, high and wide.

Seemed sadness and loneliness were her name
A dance hall madam was her claim to fame.
Her girls were the best that money could buy
The cowpokes didn’t care the cost was so high

She’d left home young, hurt and extremely mad,
When her father turned out her dark-haired lad.
She vowed never to return again to that place
Where she’d left head low and in much disgrace.

She’d been to the depths of hell and back
But not one bit of courage did she lack.
Do or die, she would make it all on her own,
For she had a child to raise ‘til grown.

The money she raised gave her child the best
So on her laurel’s she now safely could rest.
The young man was in school, a doctor to become,
No mother could be prouder of a dark-haired son.

She sold her business to a gambling man,
From all she had had she gladly ran.
Trading silken gowns for plain gingham dresses
And no more henna to liven her tresses.

A  little store bought in a friendly small town
Friends made and neighbors met from all around
She worked hard, long hours that was alright,
But sadness and loneliness filled the night.

She sold basic staples and lots of soft goods,
And handcrafted furniture made from fine woods.
She homed a young girl, with small child and unwed,
Not wanting her to forage for food nor for bed.

Life was good, better than she’d ever known,
Respected, respectable with a son all grown.
Still she looked in the eyes of all of the men
Would her search for her man never come to an end?

He’d come into town on his dappled old roan,
To buy the staples he needed for home.
Sadness and loneliness are no longer the names
Of two happy people living life on the plains.




[This message has been edited by SPIRIT (03-12-2003 01:23 AM).]

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skyshine
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1 posted 2003-03-11 10:35 PM


Oh, that is really sweet I hope it makes it in, I liked it!

Elizabeth

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

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2 posted 2003-03-11 10:46 PM


Much enjoyed!

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And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

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3 posted 2003-03-11 11:43 PM




(smiles) Oh Das, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this truly brought tears to my eyes reading it as it is amazing how two stories can become one together and when everything seems to go wrong in both perpsectives how at the crossroads all a sudden a miracle occurs! (kiss on cheek) This swept me off my feet, sweet friend, I love it, once again let me get that vote back up there, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Das, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 2003-03-12 12:18 PM


wonderful! I love poems like this!
Loren Lynn
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5 posted 2003-03-12 12:28 PM


Your poetry is full of pictures. I love to see so clearly when I read.
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6 posted 2003-03-12 12:53 PM


Back to re-vote....

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

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7 posted 2003-03-12 08:51 AM



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WhiteRose
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9 posted 2003-03-15 11:51 AM


Very nicely done, enjoyed.
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10 posted 2003-03-16 03:41 AM


Just popping in to re-vote on this cute story.

           
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Aretha Franklin  

SPIRIT
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11 posted 2003-03-16 10:45 AM


I appreciate all the great comments. Thank you.
Flower
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12 posted 2003-03-24 10:24 AM


Love a happy ending, love reading your stuff, so  i voted on this.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

Joyce Johnson
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13 posted 2003-03-26 09:46 PM


Happy to send this one back to the top.  Love, Joyce
Larry C
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14 posted 2003-03-26 10:36 PM


SPIRIT,
Good endings will get me everytime.Awesome write. I love your story telling. Voting for this now.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

jjote
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15 posted 2003-03-27 12:50 PM


Unique style. Kind of prose in poetry? Anyway, I like the story and here's my vote.

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16 posted 2003-03-27 04:18 PM


I love a well-told story... and when it rhymes, my admiration increases. *S*

This was a delight to read! *S*

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17 posted 2003-03-27 05:34 PM


This is the kind of story I love, and I love the way you told it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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18 posted 2003-03-27 09:55 PM


Nothing I love more than a tale well told...you certainly have one here.
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19 posted 2003-03-27 10:10 PM


This is one of my favorites from you. Glad to see it again.
Sandra

Larry C
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20 posted 2003-04-04 10:57 PM


Bump
Flower
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21 posted 2003-04-05 06:05 PM


This is such a great story - thank you for a happy ending.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

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22 posted 2003-04-06 12:50 PM


Thought I had already voted on this. Like it very much.

I'm a reader - not a writer.

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23 posted 2003-04-06 09:36 PM


*bump*
pjtalty
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24 posted 2003-04-07 02:10 AM


In my book, this poem definitely qualifies as a well-written, absorbing, flowing piece of narrative in ballad form. Usually the ballad metre (traditionally, anyway) uses alternating four- and three-stress lines with rhyming scheme abcb. However, some poets use other metres successfully ...as you have done with this one by using four-stress lines with rhyming scheme aabb.
It all adds up to an interesting, intriguing and entertaining read with a nice ending to the story.
Brava! Another vote coming up!

Patrick Talty

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25 posted 2003-04-09 12:50 PM


Just a little bump for my mom.
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26 posted 2003-04-12 12:11 PM


This is a wonderful story with a happy ending.....Enjoyed!!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


Bill Charles
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27 posted 2003-04-12 12:55 PM


SPIRIT - I'm glad they found each other once again. My vote is in...

BC

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28 posted 2003-04-12 03:15 AM


Bravo!
Mark Bohannan
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29 posted 2003-04-13 12:09 PM


There was no way I could let a cowboy poem go without reading it and I am smiling huge at the wonderful story that I found here.   Lines such as :
*******
He had straddled a fence ‘twixt good and bad,
*******
From a barbed wire vest his body was marred.
*******
Trading silken gowns for plain gingham dresses
And no more henna to liven her tresses.
*******

add so much to piece and also bring us some visuals (images) that help us place ourselves in the setting.  Wonderul piece and so glad to have read it and cast my vote.

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30 posted 2003-04-13 05:54 PM


Wonderful story, SPIRIT, you have my vote!

Sunkissed.

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