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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
I posted this awhile ago in the Pub. It was written by my daughter, Ellie, when she was nine years old. What a wonderful poet. Sit on a hill picking roses, Waiting for the sunset to come down on you. Stopping at a stop sign, Waiting for your friend, So you can play in the red playground. Watching the clouds go by, Thinking of a red dress, A red dress I used to wear in a cold winter night. Watching the red raindrops fall from the sky, Watching them hit the ground, And waiting for the clouds to go by, And for the red, shiny, shivery sun to shine on me. |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very nicely done - especially for a nine year old - might one presume she liked the color red. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
We'll make room for a nmine year old. Joyce |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
Spirit- She had to write the poem for school and it had to be about a color and she chose red. Joyce- She'll be happy to hear it. Best |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very good poem. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Seems the "red" apple doesn't fall far from the tree. This is really excellent work for a nine year old. Encourage her to keep writing! Tammy |
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Amara Member
since 2003-02-23
Posts 158East of the moon, west of the sun. |
This is very nice for a nine year old! This is very nice period.  She'll be great one day, I forsee it... *wink*Blessed Be Thee, Stephanie Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A charming sense of beauty and innocence...Delightful poem!  Love & Light to you both! Earth Angel |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
I have to say that your daughter,Ellie,put a big red smile on my face!  Tell her to keep writing.I think she has a talent there.You have a nice red vote from me!Peace on Earth,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I remember this one. My vote is in. Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
 Just in here |
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