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leighsa
Member

since 2003-02-27

Posts 74
Oregon, United States Of America

0 posted 2003-03-16 12:48 PM

I've Cried
I've been down and out
With nowhere to go,
No place to run,
to let my troubles be.

I've been myself,
No one else, but me.

Theres been times when i wanted to cry,
and sometimes i did.

Some cries i held within, just to be strongm
Now the selg-control and strength is gone.

I'm too weak to carry on, There've been to many hurts,
For this fourteen years old to bare.

I've been taledn protective attitude, one thta doesnt care.
My thoughts have shifted,
my mind had changed.

Sometimes i cry wondering ,
who's to Blame...

ME?
Ashgiel

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-03-16 01:12 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Believe me, I used to feel this exact same way all the time, when I was a little boy I suffered depression up till I was 15, and I wanted to end my life then but before I rid of myself God pushed me back and He taught me to love myself and I knew I was too hard on myself, I knew I was to blame, so I forgave myself and now repay all of that by embracing each new day with a smile! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs out to you, sweet friend, God Bless You, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-03-16 01:17 PM

Excellent!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

3 posted 2003-03-16 02:40 PM

Honest and sweet!!

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     *`·.¸.·´*
    Love Always
       Kellie

I TAWT I TAW a puddy CAT!

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

4 posted 2003-03-16 02:46 PM

This is a nice little write and for that I vote for it. Maybe you shouldn't be in so much of a hurry that you pass up all your spelling errors because it does take away from the read, it's too distracting. What you post here is autograph, it says you were here, say it with pride. My vote is cast.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-03-18 09:50 AM

I hope you are in a better place now. I felt like putting my arms around you and saying, "Everything is going to be all right! You'll see!"

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

6 posted 2003-03-22 04:27 AM

Great big hugs to you as I have been there at times in my life as well.

Dawn

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-03-22 10:37 AM

This really touched my heart. I also want
to give you a great big Motherly and
friendly hug. I also want to tell you that
I don't think the reasons for makng you
feel these ways are your own fault. I
truly pray that things will be better for you.

My thoughts and prayers are with you.
Heart Hugs,
Ethel

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

8 posted 2003-03-22 11:34 AM

I like it

It has my vote!
I do want to point two typos out.. forgive I am not being rude, just thought you might want to know. Believe me I am the queen of typos LOL and I know I appreciate when someone tells me.

In the 10th line you have selg instead of self
And in the 13th line you have taledn and thta.

Again, I do like the poem and it definately has my vote

Tara

"in my field of paper flowers
and candy clouds of lullaby
i lie inside myself for hours
and watch my purple sky fly over me"
- Imaginary by Evanes

edited cause I'm a dork and forgot to check the vote box

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (03-22-2003 11:35 AM).]

ZeraStarloft
Junior Member

since 2003-01-07

Posts 11
in a marigold

9 posted 2003-03-22 01:16 PM

i think that everyone has felt this way.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

10 posted 2003-03-22 10:34 PM

I've Cried
I've been down and out
With nowhere to go,
No place to run,
to let my troubles be.

Me too.

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

11 posted 2003-04-11 09:59 PM

Maybe a little bump will help.

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

12 posted 2003-04-12 01:09 AM

A frank write.

2+2=5 for sufficiently large values of 2
--Smit
My Creations

Neeraja
Senior Member

since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

13 posted 2003-04-12 03:17 AM

Neeraja

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