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Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

0 posted 2003-03-16 10:24 AM


Life is something unique
Many believe we are alone
As seemingly the center
Of all of existence
Unknown creatures gather around
Beyond our unknown recognition
They all scatter whimsically
Above the sights sweeping through
Messengers to take away with us
When death finds its time here
No one knows where or when they'll be
Beings laying softly on our conscienceness
Mystical, magical, humanly impractical
A sense or a breeze rushing briskly by
Uncontainble within perceptions of our soul
Death tolls the bells of ashes on a heart
Coming together as one with might
Lasting victory within the passage of a season
Fall breaks quickly into winter in one's presence
Gradually breathless the stream stands still
All is stolen and taken home to remain
Fallen leaves held securely by the dew
Twilight splashes blackness against the shine
Transcending space and time through limits
Billowing shadows against our inner being
Simultaneos lightening shudders as thunder crashes
Neverending speech hangs on to every echo
Eternal putter against our objections
Laying low softly standing as one

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink


© Copyright 2003 Bridgette C. Morgan Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
SPIRIT
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1 posted 2003-03-16 10:28 AM


This is a beautiful write and certainly gets a big and vote from me.
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2 posted 2003-03-16 01:05 PM




(sigh) Oh Bridgette, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I think ever so much we take the beauty of nature for granted and must reach out and touch it again! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, may we become one with the seasons and sing with the colors, yay, you have my impressionist vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bridgette, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-03-16 01:16 PM


Beautiful!

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-03-16 08:21 PM


Very beautiful, Bridgette.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

Flower
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5 posted 2003-03-17 11:49 AM


Really liked this, voted.

Love reading all these great writes.
I write not!

WhiteRose
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6 posted 2003-03-17 12:09 PM


A lovely write. I really enjoyed this read.
Earth Angel
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7 posted 2003-03-17 12:29 PM


You certainly were spinning some wondrous magic with your beautiful words. Thoroughly enjoyed this reading experience!

Springtime hugs,
EA

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8 posted 2003-03-17 09:56 PM


wonderful my friend. . . so good to hear your voice again. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Jason Lyle
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9 posted 2003-03-17 10:12 PM


One of these days I will learn to insert smileys, this gets a big one.Well done.
Jason

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10 posted 2003-03-17 10:22 PM


I have to tell you that you are the kind of person I would love to go to coffee with, shame this world is so big.  Seems you have a wonderful outlook on life, and it shows in your poetry.  Absolutely lovely.

            
Wishing You The Luck Of The Irish!

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11 posted 2003-03-18 09:46 AM


i think the title alone makes it worth inclusion in the book...what a great one!
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12 posted 2003-03-18 12:09 PM


This one begged to be read several times... and I thoroughly enjoyed each reading. *S*
Chanson
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13 posted 2003-03-18 12:46 PM


This is gorgeous, Justbleu! *s

I'm going to read it again
...
and again.

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

Lone Wolf
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14 posted 2003-03-18 08:22 PM


Great work!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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15 posted 2003-03-18 11:25 PM


Mysteria's thoughts are my own. This is beautiful, Bridgette
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16 posted 2003-03-19 11:35 AM


Beautifully penned enjoyed it very much

Charisma

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17 posted 2003-03-19 03:26 PM


I enjoyed this very much. Beautiful writing.

Voted with a big thumbs up!

SG

Justbleu
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18 posted 2003-03-19 08:22 PM


Hugs to all of you my dear passionate friends!!!! THANK YOU!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


wranx
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19 posted 2003-03-19 11:19 PM


I seemed to have missed this. (for awhile)

Layers and layers.

Ed.

"The shortest distance between two points is.....sometimes intolerable"

~Bukowski~

Rex Allen McCoy
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20 posted 2003-03-25 09:28 AM


...................
Gradually breathless the stream stands still
All is stolen and taken home to remain
Fallen leaves held securely by the dew
Twilight splashes blackness against the shine

...................
Some really great lines here

enjoyed

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21 posted 2003-03-25 01:25 PM


I don't know how I missed this one.  Love.y. I don't see anyplace to vote Joyce
waldopepper
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22 posted 2003-03-28 10:29 PM


Majestic wisdom Bridgette.  Your words ring with the musings that face us all at one time or another.  Very profound my friend.
QjQ
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23 posted 2003-04-24 01:45 PM


Mystical, magical, humanly impractical

what a great choice of words to express

"one needs not challenge all the players to win the game"

arthur
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24 posted 2003-04-24 02:49 PM


beautifully put
arthur

kayjay
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25 posted 2003-04-24 07:32 PM


Wonderful word selection.  Many different images can be inferred from this fine write.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

passing shadows
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26 posted 2003-04-28 03:37 AM


I am glad this made it in. I enjoyed the read.
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