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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA 
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Waning moon like scimitar stabbing at the dark Shards of light shining afar uplifting heavens ark And night creeps by like dragons smoke until the hour that it will stroke the time for morning to awake in darkness 'til the dawning break Dying soon the eyeing eve watching Earth revolve Spying 'til the stars must leave no mystery to solve and night creeps by with raging ease escaping land and tempting seas For Waning Moon still holds the keys to tidal ebb and flowing breeze,after all... the moon is not made up of cheese 4/13/88 Geoffrey Sonnen If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. Martin Luther King,Jr. Detroit,1963 [This message has been edited by Street Heart (03-14-2003 12:48 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) This is spellbinding, sweet friend, Lady Luna is truly the key of light that opens through the darkness and to behold such a beauty is a blessing! (big hugggssssss) My vote is back up, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Geoffrey, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my yes! ~Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Happy to vote for this lovely little gem. Joyce |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Lovely - gets my vote |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I enjoyed this and especially your light hearted ending. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is beautifully penned, Geoffrey. I enjoyed the read.  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Simply beautiful, it gets my vote  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Smiling at this one Geoffrey, it is lovely, and gives the reader a smile at the end. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I really liked this, and the suprise ending as well. "Love makes the world go around" |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
It inspires me to imagine. Eliza Simmons |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I rem this one Geoffrey, so glad you submitted and I love the way you ended it too You know you have my vote.. m'friend. hugs Maree  |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
I like the descriptive style of this. A pleasure to read (and vote) [This message has been edited by Essorant (03-16-2003 09:36 AM).] |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
no cheese? *s You write well and except for finding out the moon is not made up of cheese I loved it...my fellow Pennsylvanian. ~A~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Are you saying that the moon is not made up of cheese?!? The next thing you'll be telling me is that there isn't an Easter Bunny! Great write! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Thank you all for your appreciation.I'll never forget the balmy Summer night when I wrote this on my friend John's front steps.The words just flew into my head as I stared up at a beautiful crecent moon.There are few things as beautiful and mysterious. Peace (yes,Peace...especially now during this horrible threat of war),Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Oh, I like this.  Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Thank you for voting,Lost Dreamer! If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Enjoyed!!!! Bridgette  [This message has been edited by Justbleu (04-03-2003 09:29 AM).] |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Street Heart, I love the images in this one, and your complex rhyme scheme is a treat. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well done, and as a fellow moon lover, I should know. Peace hugs back Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yep, yep, yep...gotta have it! |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Thank you Brigette,Nan,Sandra and Serenity Blaze for your votes and appreciation Peace to you,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
really awesome write! loved the ending too, made me smile. you got my vote! take care. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Just a little bump. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the oldies are the goodies...got my vote! |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a beautiful poem!! I enjoyed the read!!! Neeraja |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Thank you,Amy,SPIRIT,passing shadows,and Neeraja,for your appreciation and votes! Peace,Geoffrey If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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