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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Walk in The Sun Shallowing in a tropic sea Gathering antiquity's birth I dawdle in serenity. The body warms in sundry rays From whimsy's sip of mental mirth A tea baptismal in the waves. Absorbed in my temerity Left high and dry from neap's full worth I steep in rare exotic tea. Sacrosanct and minuscule. With inquiries of a fool. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hugs you! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Hugs back and a  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as I love the ocean and you truly have us all soaking up the sun reading the glare of your words! (big hugggsssssss) So much for the afterhlow, now I really have to go to the beach, yay, you have my vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
But if we had all the answers, what would be our excuse for our foolishness? *L* The search is far more adventurous and colorful, like your poem, Sy. I enjoyed the stroll. When you think you have heard it all, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Eanjoyed this Seymour  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The body warms in sundry rays From whimsy's sip of mental mirth A tea baptismal in the waves. Absorbed in my temerity Left high and dry from neap's full worth I steep in rare exotic tea. Sacrosanct and minuscule. With inquiries of a fool. ================================== Id walk with ya anywhere and I dont even have to ask what kind of tea you speak of here...do I  "Trees are poems that the earth writes upon the sky ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you for the time and read. Chanson Glad to have you on the stroll. Dark Angel Thank you for the read and reply. JM, And I would walk anywhere with you. WWRS  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Smiling here... even though the sun is just a fond memory. *S* I like this very much! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Exceptional work, my friend... regards, sudhir |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
as beautiful as always Charisma |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
very good, Seymour... |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
awesome!!! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A mellow write, and short for you. Taught me a new word...neap. Tint of reflection, a hue of subdue. Enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Sy! Hugs and a vote!! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I really, really enjoyed this one and can't believe you taught Richard a word he didn't know (he is a walking dictionary) good for you on both counts, loved it, now where is my pen to vote |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Yes, I thought it was short for you, but no matter, it's always a treat to read your words. hugs M |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour - Wonderful & it gets my vote. hugs to you, Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you dear. Sudhir, Thank you my friend. Charisma Thank you so much. garysgirl Thank you dear. Kellie, awesome is good. RSWells Thank you this means allot. Nancy, Hugs back my dear. Sharon, Cute and a for you.Maureen, Hugs back. Chris, Hugs back and thank you. |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
This is a beautiful poem. I hope it gets into the book! "If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Shallowing in a tropic sea Gathering antiquity's birth I dawdle in serenity. " Is everything you write beautiful?? I think so.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
fractal007 If you voted for it, it will, thank you. Sea, I hope so. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Wellllll...... I think I like your short poetry even better than the long! Thanks for this one! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Absolutely...a heartfelt YES! Love this, my friend. Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - wow, another winner... BC |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
What fool would that be?.. Surely not you, Sy... This is lovely... |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I don't know how you could chose from among the all the gems of poetry you have shared with us. I'm glad that wasn't my choice. But anything you submit is prime material for the book. All of your work is magnificent Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ratleader You are kind thank you my friend. Vicky, Hugs and thank you. Bill, Thank you my friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, From one lovely to another, LOL Elizabeth, Thank you love, you are ever in my dreams. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
That's you, alright (except the part about being a fool). Your style is uniquely you, Sy. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Hey...there's no sun here, it's snowing (again) I enjoyed the little respite you gave me, now send a bit of that snow this way!! BTW...I'm still waiting here in PA for my proofs of your drawings of the lizards |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LngJhnAg Thank you my good friend. hoot, Thank you sweet. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (02-24-2003 11:20 AM).] |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
How on earth did I miss this beautiful write? Better late than never - my vote is cast. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SPIRIT That's the spirit, LOL |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
How did I miss one of your wondeful treasures Sy??? This is great!!!! I always enjoy your poetry!!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I enjoyed this poem a lot!!! Neeraja |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bridgette, Thank you so much. Neeraja Thank you for the read and enjoy. |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Definitely one to be read over & over. you have my vote. Sunkissed. |
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