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Crazy Love (repost at request) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Crazy Love (3/4/03) I have bled scarlet words Of woe For you I have swallowed back Boulder sized rocks of humiliation For you I have beat fist against chest Trying to start a dying heart Because of you I have self-mutilated My now weeping soul Because of you I have broken every nail Trying to scratch all traces of you From my skin To rid myself of you And now, I hand you my Heart, soul, and sanity You own them all…. Now love me [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (03-14-2003 11:32 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes..enjoyed then..and do now.. [This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (03-14-2003 04:57 PM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you! It got losteded..had to repost the repost. Geez that is too complicated for my simple mind.. Susan |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Is that not too much to ask? (sad sigh) I am glad you got this back up so I can again vote it in, forgiveness is a central part of love and if he truly has the heart he can console all he afflicted upon your heart, I send many angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
Wow! Such power in there with so few words. Raw emotion stated directly and eloquently. Must say that I truly relate. Peace,Geoffrey P.S.I wanted to vote,but saw nothing to click for the vote.Perhaps get in contact with Ron to change that for I'd like to see this in the book. If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
All fixed, sorry I am slow today! Susan |
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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA |
VOTE!  |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Very beautiful. Dawn [This message has been edited by DawnG (03-14-2003 04:22 PM).] |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I'll vote for this. Joyce [This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (03-14-2003 04:42 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! ~ Trace my body with your words.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I liked this as well this time as before when I read......  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Wow, I really like this. Very nicely done.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Pretty powerful, I tend to hold back a bit for rainy days.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
came back to vote again for this gem of pen |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes...worth a vote for sure... if for no otehr reasin than the ending being one to not only tie the thought together but to add a bit of a twist to it... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
After all that you have given, you deserved to be loved!---and very well at that! Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very good!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I have broken every nail Trying to scratch all traces of you From my skin To rid myself of you Oh my... this is raw... and excellent!! *S* |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
what one will do to fight for love ;-) incredibly passionate....I'll vote! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Cast my vote too Charisma |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
If I didn't vote for this the first time, I don't know what's wrong with me! Loved it! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good job, Susan! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you! [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (03-24-2003 12:35 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God - Sue - this powerful - I thought I had read this already - *I swear I am losing it* - been there - still am . . . xxoo |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Awesome! |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
wow!  breathtaking, the emotion just came right off the screen and hit me!  A very powerful piece! well done, it is beautifully said... love, Claire "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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waldopepper Member
since 2003-03-18
Posts 157Tennessee, USA |
A desperate and reckless confession. Hard to dismiss and that makes it all the more true. Stunning. |
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