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*Belabebeautiful*

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since 2003-01-03

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washington, USA

0 posted 2003-03-13 12:58 PM

Hey everyone, this one doesn't make a whole lot of sense unless you sit and think about it for a while..And I'm not sure it even makes sense then, but I think that's why I like it so much! Comments are always appreciated!

The wind hits me softly
As I stand at the waters edge
Thinking of days and nights gone by
And feelings left unsaid

Quietly the water laps
Against the sun kissed sand
Reflecting its gentle turbulence
Against a chaotic land

The aqua water cleanses the mind
And heals the troubled soul
Where literal no longer makes sense
And incoherent expression makes you whole

Silent things have become
As if seen though a mirrored glass
Philosophy construed, turned inside out
Dusty seasons left to pass

Fluidity of motion
Like the delicate wings of a dove
Show grace of majestic beauty
Imagined in those we love

Problems go to heaven
Solutions go to hell
Wronged was a world perfectly right
The first night darkness fell

So through the imagined picture we see
Distant lands afar
Left to bleed in symphonic misery
Imploded like a blown out star

But for a moment of space
A subject of time allotted to me
The weight of the world is lifted
And for a second I am free

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

[This message has been edited by *Belabebeautiful* (03-13-2003 12:59 AM).]

Loren Lynn
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since 2003-03-12

Posts 10

1 posted 2003-03-13 02:24 AM

Beautifully written!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-03-13 08:48 AM

Very very nicely worded piece.
~Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words..
And in doing so, you touch my heart. ~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-13 09:01 AM

(smiles) Yay! I think I've read this before but I really loved reading this and find this worthy for Reflections, yay! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2003-03-13 11:36 AM

Well I apprciated your honesty in saying you wrote this piece for yourself, and for that alone you got my vote. That is what poetry is - a definition of oneself.

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-03-13 12:15 PM

*Belabebeautiful,
Makes sense to me, enjoyed.

[This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (03-13-2003 12:16 PM).]

*Belabebeautiful*

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since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

6 posted 2003-03-13 08:46 PM

Thank you guys for the comments! Noah, I have posted this one before but since I wanted it to be in the book I decided that I would repost it in here.
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

SPIRIT
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since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

7 posted 2003-03-13 11:04 PM

I think I understood it just fine.
Beautifully written. Gets my vote

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

8 posted 2003-03-13 11:08 PM

I think I understood, also...and it was beautiful...

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

9 posted 2003-03-15 11:58 AM

Very nicely done.

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

10 posted 2003-03-15 02:05 PM

This is well written...sometimes those fleeting moments can really help us through. Nicely done Bella.

Elizabeth

It's not having what you want, it's wanting what you've got...
--Sheryl Crow

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2003-03-18 08:37 PM

Oh yes,loved this one!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

12 posted 2003-03-19 05:48 PM

Squeeze every ounce of those precious moments...

Love and Light,
Earth Angel

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

13 posted 2003-03-22 11:00 AM

This poem is very understandable, and very well written. I enjoyed it immensely.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

14 posted 2003-03-26 09:55 AM

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

15 posted 2003-04-09 07:00 PM

i understood this very well! in fact
a very good write! take care.
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

16 posted 2003-04-09 07:43 PM

It makes very good sense and is well done. Joyce

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