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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2003-03-11 08:43 PM

Color me rose tint on pale
white flesh of maiden fair
faults behind the soft of veil
the lightest gold of hair.

Sapphire blue for eyes that swim
with dreams so deep in swirl
the look of innocence, of whim
of the hidden little girl.

Pale of shades for mood of life
lost in the midst of blame,
placed in picture as the wife
hint of gray in frame.

Color me with passioned brush
paint me with your artists touch.

WhiteRose

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-03-11 08:44 PM

YES!!!!

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2003-03-11 08:44 PM

A portrait of exquisite beauty.
For sure. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-03-11 08:59 PM

(smiles) Oh Anne, I said it before and I'll say it again, you always color your words with rainbows and animate your heart and love with the grace of the prisms! (kiss on cheek) This is marvelous, sweet friend, you have my technicolor vote, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

4 posted 2003-03-11 10:51 PM

I read this the first time around, so I just wanted to stop by once again and tell you it's really beautiful.

Elizabeth

[This message has been edited by skyshine (03-11-2003 10:53 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-03-12 11:34 AM

WhiteRose
Lovely write and read.

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

6 posted 2003-03-12 02:44 PM

Beautiful penned

Charisma

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-03-12 02:48 PM

Anne, I loved reading this before and now, too.
Hugs,
Ethel

Essorant
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since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

8 posted 2003-03-12 05:24 PM

You give a lovely pallette. Well written.

[This message has been edited by Essorant (03-12-2003 05:25 PM).]

KristieSue

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since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

9 posted 2003-03-12 09:29 PM

markin' this for the book with my crayola crayon!!!

KS :-)

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2003-03-12 11:33 PM

Beautifully done!

R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

11 posted 2003-03-13 09:22 AM

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

12 posted 2003-03-13 10:15 AM

Very pretty....but almost sorrowful
Vote given.

"Now I'm convinced that he's heaven sent, and must be out of his mind- mama he's crazy, crazy over me."

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

13 posted 2003-03-13 05:21 PM

Anne--
I love this
one of the best of yours..I think
yes..

*Belabebeautiful*

Senior Member

since 2003-01-03

Posts 696
washington, USA

14 posted 2003-03-13 08:49 PM

I really liked this! Simply yet elegant and beautifully written. Nicely done!
~Live and Laugh~

People always ask me why I don't look toward my future I tell them to many interesting things are happening today.
~Bella~

SPIRIT
Senior Member

since 2002-12-29

Posts 1745
California Desert

15 posted 2003-03-13 11:00 PM

Well done - happy to cast my vote.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

16 posted 2003-03-18 01:05 PM

Was this one of the lost ones? For I swear I've read it... Or am I blonder than usual today? LOL

Either way... I like it very much! *S*

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

17 posted 2003-03-18 01:29 PM

Color you perfect!
Lovely as you yourself truly are.

Warm, springtime hugs,
EA

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

18 posted 2003-03-18 05:45 PM

Thank you all so much for commenting on this poem. It's one that is kind of special to me. It is also one that did get lost so that is why some of you remember reading it before. You are all so very kind in your responses, and for that I want to say a special thank you. It means a great deal to me to feel a sense of belonging in a place where I post my poetry, and all of you have made me feel that way.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

19 posted 2003-03-18 08:15 PM

Very nice work!!

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

20 posted 2003-03-18 10:25 PM

Thank you Lone Wolf, for reading and responding.

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

21 posted 2003-03-26 12:13 PM

Hi WhiteRose,

Much enjoyed,

Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

22 posted 2003-03-26 01:54 PM

Hi Cerenity

Thanks so much for reading.

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