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arthur
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0 posted 2003-03-11 06:44 PM


willow girl


A girl,willow lathe,fourteen.
Unsure,more confident than Eve.
Glance shyly,to see if you are seen.
Defient look,inward secret preen.

Girl child,child woman.
Strange mixture of all these.
Granted power to summon.
Siren song on a summer breeze.

So sure,yet so unsure.
Bold,yet quite afraid.
Wicked ,yet still pure.
Wanton,yet still a maid.

Arthur
re-post as requested

[This message has been edited by arthur (03-11-2003 07:11 PM).]

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2003-03-11 06:55 PM


YES!!! Now please go back in and check the book submission box!
Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-03-11 07:16 PM


Thank you Michael!!  
Chanson
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3 posted 2003-03-11 07:25 PM


I welcomed the chance to read it
again. It's even better than I
remembered. *s

When you think you have heard it all,
listen more closely.
~Dorene

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-03-11 07:31 PM




(smiles) Oh Michael, this is lovely, sweet friend, adolescence is indeed a tike of juggling emotions and the horomones can always make growth patterns unpredoctable, but one thing for sure is that amidst the confusion is love! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-03-12 03:31 PM


Glad you re-posted.

"Love makes the world go around"
~with love and hugs from Ethel__GG~  
                  

SPIRIT
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6 posted 2003-03-12 10:00 PM


Just popped in to vote.
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7 posted 2003-03-12 11:37 PM


Me too, wondered if you got your voting box sorted out, as here is mine!

           
R.E.S.P.E.C.T.
Aretha Franklin  

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-03-12 11:45 PM


...ah, yes! I, myself, recall similar days as a child-woman and the siren song I sang on a summer breeze...

~ May the breezes be warm with promises of things to come...

Earth Angel

WhiteRose
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9 posted 2003-03-17 10:35 AM


A girl,willow lathe,fourteen.
Unsure,more confident than Eve.
Glance shyly,to see if you are seen.
Defient look,inward secret preen.

Very nicely done, it gets my vote.

wranx
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10 posted 2003-03-17 11:33 PM


Voted for this once before.

Will do so again.


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